was that a reference to arrested development?

because I was sad and then I burst out laughing. Gud job

RUN AFTER HIM! Grab his sexy waist slash stomach and hold him! Tell him you think about him and that you want to be around him! Tell him something! Don't let him walk away! UPDATE AGAIN SOON PLEASE!

Airbabies! I love that discription. I had hoped that Tahno would come and knock the fight off somehow and they'd have a heart to heart, but apparently they're very good at missing each other.

Damn. She's always running away. Does she even think about how he feels about that?

Darn it! They got interrupted.

Wheee! I'm so happy!

No! Don't leave him Korra! It was just getting good!

Who couldn't resist asking about Tahno?

I really like the way you write these characters; its as if you can feel the tension

Wow, I don't know what my feelings are doing. Just another great chapter, loving the story.

Um 'I've made a huge mistake.' I don't suppose you were quoting Arrested Development?

pls update soon
btw
u suc 4 not updating sooner
das right
-butts

There is so much emotion in this. I feel bad for Korra and Tahno. This was a good chapter! Keep up the good work.

I thought you did a good job with this chapter - I've written lime/lemon before and it honestly can be very tough! You managed to make it not terribly explicit or dirty though, you definitely did a nice job!

Oh! I really liked this chapter as well. I really do love this pairing and I really do like the way you utilize their emotions and really capture what's going on. Oh, and you are a lovely writer as well. Keep up the great work!

I really enjoyed the first chapter! I like how you captured Tahno's opposite and clashing emotions for Korra, very cool and different. Now I'm off to read the rest ;)