I really have no words but I loves this so much I have to review. The part were Sherlock was taken just broke my heart an John just snsjshshsbs magifcent job

That was so good. I acn't believe it was your first for the fandom! It was just lole canon with a bit of romance sprinkled on top, and that was perfectly delightful. 3 I love your work!

Ahh this was really absolutely fantastic, thank you so much :)

Very good story, I really liked it !

Loved it. Brilliantly done

This was very good for your first Sherlock fic. Similarly, this was also the first Sherlock fic I have read so in way, you have popped my Johnlock cherry! I want to commend you on your excellent observation of Sherlock’s behavior including the objective way he goes about his experiments. It really makes the story feel like an extension of the show. You brilliantly capture the dynamic between him and John and while reading I could easily hear their voices and see the expressions of the characters. It was really very sweet!

You are giving me Johnlock feels. Stop it omg.

Wonderful :D. You should definitely make more in this fandom :) :).

Good, really good. Heart wrenching and amazing. Too tired to post a proper review. Remind me later.

Aww They're so cute. I like the nightmare basis-thing. That was a good way to slowly introduce the relationship bit. Because you know, it's true that they seem very close to a couple in the show already, but it does take that extra edging in to make it really feel canon. So thanks for that. It was a really smooth transition.

And thanks for writing, as always! Goodness, it feels like forever since I've reviewed something of yours (or maybe that's just me, who knows), but you're still not disappointing me! :D Better than I remembered.

Thanks again!

This was brilliant! :D

D'awww! I liked your last-minute additions, as well.

Absolutely wonderful!

This was such a beautiful story. Loved it from start to finish. Brilliant work!

I am at a loss for words. You are so lovely, amazing and talented and I'm so happy and touched that this was for me. Best birthday present ever!

You took my ridiculously simple requests and ran away with them, making something magical and new. The initial argument created the tension which carried beautifully for the rest of the story. Sherlock's obliviousness and lack of boundaries was perfectly in character. The way you wrote his "experiment" made his actions seem like a perfectly logical progression in order to reach an end; so Sherlockian.

I particularly loved John's dialogue and reactions. He didn't overreact, but certainly took everything seriously, from the argument to the abduction. His reactions seemed so honest and made me love him all the more. He was always thinking it through, but cared so deeply it hurt. Also, when he offered Sherlock a cuppa, I did get a little fluttery. xD

The kidnapping had me biting my nails. Why do you do these things to me? But for all the stress, it was very well done. I was so anxious when the knife kept coming out, and I'm sitting here practically wailing, "I just wanted them to kiss!" But it gave the story so much more depth and lent that nice twist of angst. Also, doctor and military John both made an appearance! You spoil me.

Finally, the kiss. Ah. -happy sigh- Just what I wanted, and the perfect conclusion to a wonderful story. This seems to fit perfectly into their everyday lives. Thank you for the most wonderful birthday present! You are so talented and lovely and I hope you write forever and ever. D And always share with me, of course. Please continue your adventures into the Sherlock fandom! I'll always be here cheering you on, and reveling in the spoils.

I love you!
-Kelly