I litteraly cried!
that was a beautiful story and i really enjoyed playing it!

So dumb question here but are you going to continue or not? Because this has been an awesome fanfic and honestly I was hoping you would write more, but I can understand if you don't want to, writing is hard. But anyways, i just wanted to say how much I love this fic!

I enjoyed reading this story. It makes sense in that deep way that a proper fanfiction should, being rooted in, but growing from its source.

The present's identity was a bit much, in my opinion, though.

Ok my last comment was incomplete due to some technical difficulties but I was saying that that chapter was very dramatic (in a good way) I was expecting that chorus in the background with the gothic style vocalizations.

On to this chapter: I loved it! Especially the last part there where Nessa is crying and I was thinking "yeah you deserved it!" And out of no where it's like "you're pregnant with his child?!" It was awesome. The whole story was really good! It was pretty realistic, where there wasn't a lot of loki coddling his children but just the right amount of it so it doesn't look OOC. All in all it was great. Thank you for writing this!

When reading story that's completed I don't usually co

This is AWESOME!

great story) one question, the line he said after he touch the ring and the darkness bind them, is it from the lord of the rings? looks the same)

I hope you're happy, because this chapter made me cry. I love Nessa... and Jormungand's punishment was... deserving, but still sad. I love Sleipnir-so glad he didn't get banished. Hela'll be okay-she'll have her dead for company, right? :)

Like I said, I'm also writing a story about Hela-however, mine begins with her banishment being ended. Norse mythology research has been a lot of my life, and I've looked forward to getting alerts that this was updated, because it's always fun to read about the same character as one you're getting to know :)

How will Steve react to Hela being banished... :)

Thanks for writing this! Can't wait for the epilogue.

Oh My God! Was the One Ring from the Lord of The Rings? And poor Nessa, Jormungand's not going to even know about her. Update soon please I REALLY want to see how this ends.

I hate Odin so much. Hela didn't really do anything on Midgard she was making sure that Sleipnir was safe. It was Jorgy and Fenrir that were causing the mayhem.

Poor Sleipnir I hope they can save him.

*close to crying*

Oh. My. Gods. This is so good! Please hurry with the next chapter

More! Loki's gonna kick his ass!

interesting, please update)