Good good

Good

Bravo! Bravo! We'll done. Where do I begin with how good this story was? The great pre-Mass Effect 1 history you came up with for Shepard, the brilliant way you've captured the Shepard/Ashley romance, the list just goes on. I am looking forward to seeing where this goes in your next story.

Damn good story

A great story with lots of twists and turns, but I especially love the ending. Great to see Shep/Ash together and Shep asking her to marry him. While I love ME3 I prefer that over how the game handled Shep/Ash.

Great story. looking forward to your next one

Wow amazing story and great writing considering this was your first fanfic (which I still find hard to believe). I loved the ending and I can't wait to see more from you.

I love weddings and happy endings drinks all around!
Seriously though, what a great end to a great book :)
Whats next for the shepards? Only know it'll be something good!
Keep up the good work:)

kick ass job amazing job and keep it up

Kick ass ash best ash :)

:) great chp and the sex scene was handled very well. i could totally see them playfully bicker while doing the deed lol the ending was what i enjoyed the most, how they realized they loved each other. now bring on the next chp! :D

Scott Pilgrim ftw

Getting a bit dark would be good with a little twist that she finds her sister still alive after going after the people that she think killed her sister. Dark with a bit of light is always good.

Oh wow where to start with this. Okay here goes.

The MShep/Ashley fan in me begs you to stop writing. Leave the characters I love alone. They have already had a rough time with everything; they deserve a happy ending. With unicorns and rainbows and such :)

The SciFi fan in me begs you to never stop writing. This story is good/great/AMAZING! I love the N7 training, alot of the stories dont get that across. I think you've done it beautifully. I love the dark gritty-ness of it all. I love (and hate :) see above) that Ashley and Shepard are not done fighting, that the peace they've fought for haven't arrived for them.

I began to read your story at 11:30 p.m, didn't stop till I finished it at 1:24 a.m. and haven't stopped thinking about since (it's 11:06 a.m. btw). I woke up feeling dreadful (thanks alot, you talented asshole :) ).
Any story that can inspire such emotion and care for the characters is doing something right and you are doing a wonderful job.

I wish I had some ideas, advice or helpful criticisms but I can think of any (maybe why I just read stories) but you keep doing the great job and I'll keep reading. Please finish this, I want to see the end.

You. Are. Amazing...youcruelheartedjackass...(ahem)... :)

Ok since you said, the story is getting way to dark for me. Too much death and dread. I know you are trying to make this realistic, but there has to be some kind hope. It's kind of depressing in a way. I get what's happening to her sister, and Shepard, and even herself, but Ashley doesn't have to become a phsycho murderer, crazed with finding her sister's killer. And I mean no offense, but it just seems like that's what she's becoming.

I still love this story and will keep reading, but I do hope there will be some kind of hope or happiness coming up.