Reviews for Coming to Terms |
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Lushcoltrane chapter 1 . 6/29/2016 Sad story. But who cut the brakes? And why was everyone at the crash site? Just curious. |
Jakarie chapter 1 . 9/11/2014 Sad but really sweet , good stuff |
bloodydragons chapter 1 . 12/25/2013 Omg this is so sad:( |
Nothing but Jori chapter 1 . 6/9/2013 This made me cry a little (ok maybe a lot) and im at a sleep over and my friend is like Jana, Dafuq u crying about!? |
xXlost.in.paradiseXx chapter 1 . 11/20/2012 Hey. This was a great story. :) But there's something I actually might kill you for: Grammar. Most of it's fine, but please, please, stop with the run-on sentences. And I mean that in the nicest way possible. You're story is amazing, but it could use some commas. For instance, "Looking up she saw Jade sitting on the gravestone and smiling down at her before pushing herself off the stone and placing her hand on her face." That's a major run-on. Instead, "Looking up, she saw Jade sitting on the gravestone, smiling down at her. That was before pushing herself off the stone, and placing her hand on Tori's face." And also, at the end, Cat should have said "I love you, too." Not "two". The words may sound the same, but they have completely different meanings. And in your A/N, the band's name is Evanescence. Good taste, though. They're one of my favorite bands :) Gret story, overall though :) |
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 7/22/2012 Ah poor Tori ut at least she got closure. Invader Johnny Signing Off. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2012 that was amazing but sooooo damn sad i totally sobbed especially when she went to the grave and saw her ghost there. this seems live deja vu idk why and this also remind me of something i wrote it was a prank gone horribly wrong...well it was amazing and super sad but amazing just so ya know :) i really enjoyed it and Eversense's song my immortal is amazing! |
BrittsLittleCheerio chapter 1 . 7/8/2012 I CRIED!Good was amazing. |
Jeremy Shane chapter 1 . 7/4/2012 Good Story |
langsohryu chapter 1 . 7/2/2012 ah...i hate you, this is so sad...but its a nice story... |
JoMikaelson chapter 1 . 6/30/2012 Aw man, I don't like Jade dying. She's one of my favorite characters besides Tori and Cat. |
The Sovereign chapter 1 . 6/30/2012 killed off jade and put tori and cat together whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! :( how tragic good one shot though |
DrDoom2006 chapter 1 . 6/30/2012 Loved it. Simply loved it. |
Ameha Kay chapter 1 . 6/30/2012 I guess u never got the chain e-mail that pretty much has the same stuff? Good story thogh PS...jade is the only person I've met that actually makes pouting look sexy :) |