nice ending. wish it was longer. but u come up with really good stories.

Haha..this was hilarious! I have to say I was a little confused in the middle, but apart from that it all was good! :)

Your fanfics never fail to make me laugh :D great

Good story, but kind of confusing when sirius/James walks in, you might want to clarify that part :)

poor sirius

Nice story

That was really great! I love the idea, it is so original! And, THANK YOU for not having any errors in your writing (i assume you edited?) Lol, but i cannot read a story with loads of spelling misyakes!so again,thanks! :):)

That was a cute story. I got a little confused, though. I think you got your Jameses mixed up a few times. Also, wasn't Lisa with Sirius when he walked into the common room? All I know is that I'm confused. Despite me being confused, it had a great plot and I don't think there were any grammatical mistakes. :) Keep on writing!

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Hahahahaha Really funny! U r a great writer!

This is so good!