That's a very nice story. It's heart wrenching to think about what happened at the end of that war...

Touching! Waaaa! I love how the crystal is brown :3

That was so inspiring wow it was beautiful in a Jedi sense it was cool to had all of the elements :-)

This one pager was fantastic it's one of my favorite one pagers please if you are thinking of the idea please Make a story about Chanelle Trixew please she sounds like a great protaginist please make more of her story she sounds inspiring hopeful smart and full of Jedi knowledge and can fight plus she can lead her men into battle I like to see that from her in a story if possible please it's so good it's award winning good please make a story

You did a great job keep up your good work and please again please make a story of Chanelle Trixew please

I really like this. There aren't too many good clone stories out there. Update soon please!

Wow! This is amazing! Well Done ;)

This is really good! :) I really like it!