| Reviews for Thor Pwns Wal Mart |
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   hermionegrangerfan2017 chapter 5 . 4/25/2019 Whew! That was intense. Good, but intense. |
| hermionegrangerfan2017 chapter 2 . 4/25/2019 Oh wow! |
| hermionegrangerfan2017 chapter 1 . 4/25/2019 I am literally laughing out loud at how well you have captured Thor's manner of speaking. This couple is so cute and fluffy, but still dark and ominous. I loved the bit about the flogger. |
| ArticHel chapter 2 . 7/26/2018 Whoa Whoa Whoa! Totally fucking hot! |
| ArticHel chapter 1 . 7/26/2018 OMFG Whoa Loved this! MUST HAVE MORE! |
| Ethereal girl chapter 1 . 3/27/2018 This is just awesome! Hilarious Thor in Wal-Mart and also very loved the other chapters but this one is pure gold! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/19/2015 This was, quite easily, the best thing I've ever read. I've needed domme!Jane in my life for the longest time, and your story delivered! Thank you so much - please write more if you ever get the inspiration! -angrysockpuppetnoises |
| TwiAaccountant chapter 1 . 4/4/2015 OMFG OMFG OMG OKAY. Okay. Each and very chapter of this story is a fucking masterpiece. I cannot believe how brilliant your writing is, and I wish there were more than 1000 chapters like this for me to read! I'm begging you, honest to God, begging you, to PLEASE WRITE MORE! It will be a blessing on humankind if you do, and lots and LOTS of people will be happy as all hell! PLEASE! |
| AlphaWolf chapter 5 . 4/3/2015 I have read this story numerous times. It always manages to make me smile and feel better on a bad day. I strongly encourage you to write more Thor/Jane stories. You have a great talent for representing the characters well and I LOVE how you write their relationship. The sexuality is very well written and hot ;). I also love how dominant and possessive Thor is. And yet he is very loyal dedicated and loving of Jane. That is a hard balance to manage but you pull it off quite impressively. PLEASE PLEASE write more stories with these two. I just adore your writing with them. Dominant Thor for the win XD Jane is a lucky gal |
| Aundielen chapter 3 . 1/4/2015 ok that was a most excellent chapter. Yessss to women on top! and YESSSSS to consent! w0000t! |
| nikie chapter 5 . 9/7/2014 awesome story keep up the good work |
| Nikie chapter 5 . 9/5/2014 great read need more stories |
| Wolvenlights chapter 3 . 3/23/2014 *Stands and applauds before kneeling next to Tony at Jane's feet* You Broke the Thunder God, Pissed off Fury, AND Impressed Tony! FREAKING AMAZING! |
| Wolvenlights chapter 1 . 3/23/2014 OMG! I have NEVER Laughed THIS DAMN HARD! I would SOOO Pay to be there if this EVER happened! ((Would be better if I was in Jane Foster's situations too)) But DAMN! This is Freaking EPIC! How did you not die laughing writing this?! |
| Romantic Obsession chapter 5 . 1/3/2014 such a fantastic story! i love it |
