Reviews for The Babysitter
DMBSJB18 chapter 4 . 6/3
Sad that they took so so long to get together. 10 yrs is a long time. Glad b didn’t put up with Es crap. The ending was great, though. I def could use an epi!
Treestar2509 chapter 4 . 4/19
I love where you took this story. You didn’t go the obvious route. Thank you for sharing.
Treestar2509 chapter 1 . 4/18
The foreplay between these too is HOT! I can’t wait to read more. Thanks for sharing.
PurpleRain27 chapter 4 . 4/9
Loved it! I even had a cry. I really wasn’t sure if we were going to get a HEA.
winterhorses chapter 4 . 12/28/2019
Thanks for the great story!
BB Masen-Cullen chapter 4 . 12/18/2019
Loved reading about these two!
Lavellan-ofthe-FreeMarches chapter 4 . 12/15/2019
This was so great! Loved it!
Lafemmevegeta chapter 4 . 11/6/2019
I enjoyed this story, even with the inbetweens glossed over, it was still very well told. Thx!
Payton79 chapter 4 . 7/13/2019
Well, I hate those long separations, but you didn't drag I out. I really loved reading this story. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Sam 'Dimples' Swarek chapter 4 . 7/6/2019
Loved it
Guest chapter 4 . 6/10/2019
Just know if I fail my exam it’s because I was addicted to this amazing story rather than revising! your writing is so good
Morrrreeeee chapter 4 . 6/3/2019
Moooorrreeee
ninny 1 chapter 4 . 5/30/2019
Good really good
Perfextskies chapter 4 . 5/20/2019
I really love this story, it’s hilarious
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 4 . 2/6/2019
I'm convinced you got this amount of favs because of the first two chapters.

THe last two chapters were just a mess. Bella is wholly unlikable, especially in the last chapter. There isn't a harsh word from Edward to Bella, she deserved to be fucking verbally stripped down and made to feel like shit.

I'm not even sure what you were going for with trying to explain Bella's actions, completely unclear. Last chapter you can bank it up to her still being sex driven immature... But this chapter? What the fuck.
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