Reviews for Coincidence
rinnyfl chapter 24 . 2/12/2016
Love the story!U r such a great author!
daizy123 chapter 24 . 7/23/2015
AHHHH! I LOVED it!
Christiangirl chapter 24 . 7/23/2013
This chapter was written like a true diary! I felt like I was reading a page from Jennifer Hotchner's personal journal! It was just so very beautiful! What a love filled chapter! You can just feel the love that JJ has for Hotch, Jack, baby boy Jamie, baby girl Amy and the entire BAU team. A beautiful ending to a beautiful story of total love and victory!
Christiangirl chapter 23 . 7/23/2013
I'm so glad to see that Hotch, JJ and Jack got everything they wanted for their lives. I'm glad that JJ got that spark of life back in her eyes and in her life. I'm also glad that she got the glow back. It's good to see JJ coming back to the BAU and that Strauss has blessed Hotch and JJ's relationship, just as long as she doesn't have to say, "GET A ROOM" to them I guess Hotch and JJ won't have any further problems with the section chief. What a wonderful story of overcoming the toughest things that life has to throw at you this story has become! Another great chapter!
Christiangirl chapter 22 . 7/23/2013
WOW! What a very surprising twist to this great story! We knew Agent Langer was a snot rag, but this? OMG! You would think the little snot rag would value his position with the FBI, but I'D guess his intense hatred of JJ clouded his judgment and rendered him stupid for the moment! Whatever it was, he'll have a lifetime in prison to think about it, providing that he didn't have anything to do with thus round of the brothers' murder spree. He'll get the death penalty, if the case is tried in the great Commonwealth of Virginia. I certainly hope that Agent Langer gets what he deserves, the little snot! Anyhoo, another great chapter!
Christiangirl chapter 21 . 7/23/2013
I'm glad to see that JJ is doing much better and she's continuing to let Hotch help her, and that's a definite plus! Another great chapter!
Christiangirl chapter 20 . 7/23/2013
Finally JJ is slowly starting to open up to Hotch, and that is a very good thing! JJ's kissing Hotch was a very sweet touch added to this great story! Hotch returning JJ's kiss was sweet also! WONDERFUL! WONDERFUL! WONDERFUL! Another wonderful thing was when Aaron asked JJ if she wanted to stay with him and Jack at his place and JJ responded by saying yes immediately. That was great and proved that although JJ had a long, tough road ahead of her, she was on the way to being well in the very near future! Baby steps lead to bigger steps. It's just very important to just step out in faith. Another great chapter!
Christiangirl chapter 19 . 7/23/2013
This is just too sad! I agree with Emily that what happened to JJ just isn't fair. First, she went through the trauma of losing her parents and her sister, Amy, and now this! No one should ever have to endure the things JJ has. I hope JJ won't continue to shut everyone out, especially not Hotch, because that would absolutely destroy him. Another great chapter!
Christiangirl chapter 18 . 7/22/2013
That Adam Parker needs to be taken to the shed and taken care of, if you know what mean. He took a lot from JJ and now the little snot needs to get what's coming. JJ lost so much, I just hope that she'll b able to come back and that she won't shut Hotch out and that she'd allow Hotch to help her out. Another great chapter!
Christiangirl chapter 17 . 7/22/2013
JJ MADE IT THROUGH SURGERY! YAAAAY! Now let's hope she can make it through the mental part of it because of the horror that Adam and his brother, Kyle put her through. Thankfully Hotch and the team is there for JJ and that's all that counts. She has her real family there for her, unlike her Aunt Teresa. That woman needs a serious beat down and a serious reality check! Another great chapter!
Christiangirl chapter 16 . 7/22/2013
WOW! You've got quite a lot going in this chapter! JJ's getting beat up constantly by the brothers grimm, the stand-off between them and the BAU team, Kyle shooting JJ in the chest and the team taking Adam and Kyle down in the chaos. Another great chapter! I'm so glad that this a completed story, or else I would have been pulling my hair out about now! HEHEHE!
Christiangirl chapter 15 . 7/22/2013
More like stormed out of Strauss' office after dealing with the dragon lady, Aaron Hotchner did. I can't believe that old battle-axe wouldln't let Hotch and his team stay on the case. They're the ones that know JJ the best. I just hope JJ can hold on for just a little longer, so that Hotch and the team will be able to save her life! Another great chapter!
Christiangirl chapter 14 . 7/22/2013
Poor Hotch! Poor JJ! These two nutchatches have JJ locked up somewhere and I hope Hotch and the team will be able to find her in time. Another great chapter!
Christiangirl chapter 13 . 7/22/2013
Please let Hotch find JJ, the true love of his life! Please don't let the nuthatch brothers get her! Another great chapter!
Christiangirl chapter 12 . 7/21/2013
I'm so glad that little Jack Hotchner loevs JJ so much that he told Hotch that he wanted JJ to stay with them forever. That really made Hotch's day and I'm quite sure that it blessed JJ's heart as well. I'm so glad that Hotch finally told JJ what how he really felt and what he really wanted from their relationship: marriage and to have children of their own. I am glad to see them work through their pain and become a couple once again. But, we know that something's looming on the horizon for JJ and we just hope Hotch and the team will be able to stop it and keep Adam and Kyle from hurting JJ any further than they already had. Another great chapter!
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