I like it. ;w;
/sorry I can't think of what to say. but's i like the story/

:3 Japan is so cute when he's nervous. Nice story

Finally! I have been WAITING for this. *worship*
Nah, I'm not a crazy shipper fangirl or anything. I just WORSHIP Kiku and his friendship with Germany and Italy is what gets me up in the morning! I would write some myself but my friends stalk my account and it'd be embarrassing if they came across them...
Well, enough rambling. This is so awesome, almost as awesome as Prussia! (Don't worry, nothing is as awesome as Prussia. NOTHING.) I don't see anything to improve, apart from some grammar mistakes, but don't mind me, I'm fussy about that kind of thing.