Please update fast story is awesome

I love that you have long chapters but levy sould not go with natsu

I really like the story. And is the Melody family going to meet up with natsu later on?

You have to update again soon! This is great! Too bad you haven't touched this story since 2013... Come back soon.

This is a good story you should update it soon

update update update. its been a year. update update update. get inspired and write. update update update. is something happening to you thats causing you to not be able to write? update update update. try saying that all in one breath

Same problem with the last one.

Huh, you keep doing dame as well. The word you're looking for is "damn."

Okay, before I continue, I just have to stop and mention this because you've done it in every chapter of every story I've read.

There. Their. They're. Fucking learn them. You get it wrong like 80% of the time man.

I love this and i hope one day chapter 8 will appear, all hail natsuxlevy

Nice!

Interesting story, but you really should remove the grammar warning on your bios considering your always using 'their' when you should have used 'there', and you spell 'damn' with an 'e' instead of an 'n'. Sounds nitpicky, but its incredibly distracting.

wait what kind of magic do Kosei and Blake use? reply

All hail the future pyromaniac. He will burn the world to ash." he said dully.

"Only if I'm bored." Natsu pouted.
Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha all hail natsu.

so many SPaG errors it hurts