I just stumbled on this... Glad I did too! It was great! Funny twist at the end, the writing was splendid as well. All and all, Greaaat! (tony tiger pulling through).

Heh heh heh, SURPRISE ATTACK! Nice one Bianca, I had always waited for this moment, though I'm surprised that Bianca's father wasn't there to scold Cheren or anything

That was such a cute story. I laughed out loud when I saw the line "I don't remember ever becoming a father, Bianca." I don't quite understand the logic at the end but other than that, I loved the conversation on the way home. I love it!

this story was so adorable, well written, had a great plot, and had a wonderful ending. I love it! There's not too many Bianca and Cheren stories out there, so this was a nice refresher!