| Reviews for Worlds Apart |
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   Princess mAlice chapter 12 . 2/26/2018 A lot is going on its getting confusing the way you incorporated so many characters. What happened to Mr Kagami and why hasn't Maka quit her job yet or how does she afford to pay for university. I feel like what was in the story description does not match your plot. Also you get rid of any opposition fairly quickly that it's not even a conflict. Example the black star and soul and Maka possible love triangle, the Justin and soul and Maka love triangle, the fact that Kagami and the old pervert from the brothel in the beginning fell off the face of the earth along with Liz Thompson opposition. Maybe you should focus on one love triangle at a time and put more thought and effort into it before adding another love interest or antagonist. |
| I'm-A-Brat chapter 12 . 3/28/2017 I've never watch soul eater, I admit, but your summary interested me so I read it, and damn do you write good. I even looked up the names of the main characters just so that I could really get the fanfic. You haven't updated in three years, but that's okay, because I enjoyed what I read, even if it was only twelve chapters. Maybe one day you'll update. :) |
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/29/2016 its been quite a while...are u going to update soon |
| LuNa3300 chapter 12 . 8/31/2016 The only thing I have to say is that I love your story can't wait for the next update |
| lillyRdalton chapter 12 . 5/28/2016 OMG! I LOVE IT! THIS IS AMAZING! Please update soon, I love it soooo much that ive actually read it twice now. I couldn't find it at first, but I found it now! |
| CyberManiac chapter 1 . 1/23/2016 This story needs an "AU" or "Alternative Universe" in the description or an author's note. Otherwise it's a bit disconcerting in the beginning trying to figure out if the characters know each other or not, espeically since it still takes place in Death City and Chupacabra's with the same characters. |
| AnimeFlower chapter 12 . 1/9/2016 Nooooooooooooooooooooooo! Update plz I would love to finish this story! |
| AnimeFlower chapter 11 . 1/9/2016 Wow...well that was...weird...anyway loving it! Any stupid Justin! He can go to hell! |
| AnimeFlower chapter 10 . 1/9/2016 This chapter was very good I liked it ! Soul's mum is rude though. Anyway loving the story! |
| AnimeFlower chapter 7 . 1/9/2016 Wow this is complicated ! But I is still awesome! |
| AnimeFlower chapter 6 . 1/9/2016 Hmm well that was...sad I guess he acted like nothing happened...saddnesssssss Awesome Story So Far! |
| AnimeFlower chapter 5 . 1/9/2016 Haha this chapter was cute and funny ! |
| AnimeFlower chapter 4 . 1/9/2016 Yep I definitely am loving this fic I I amazing do far! |
| AnimeFlower chapter 2 . 1/9/2016 Haha loving this story already ! |
| AnimeFlower chapter 1 . 1/9/2016 Haha that was funny...great fic so far! \(-)/ yay! |
