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I liked how you changed the episode to make it more romantically :)

Thank you! I personally hated on how little romance Danny and Sam had over that series and suddenly, in Phantom Planet, they have the entire romance thing. It's like that was just an ending for a series that people had suddenly lost interest in.

This is a really well-written scene. :)

-Gray

Sad face. That's what I did. But, good writing.

-Taylor Tonks

Cute and well written
Very much enjoyed reading :)

Very sweet! I still think that it would have been better if Sam had told him in the show. . But then again, if she had, we would have had less DxS adorableness to enjoy!

Anyway, I rant too much. Nice work

-Charmy

Oh that was so sad... :(

Very romantic though! I loved it, the last part about the eyeliner was pritty funny. I cracked a smile at that one!

XD

nice job! :D

Kind of ironic that a DP fan who hates the DxS pairing because it had been so mainstream ever since it the show appeared becomes a part of the group. Well regardless, this came out nicely and it felt like an alternate scene.

Awesome, sweet, adorable, tender moment! I love it.