great story

This is such a cute and lovely story. I love it!

So your 17 I am 12 young I now but my favorite is raphael I think he is cut and hot and he has the same personality as me hot headed I wish they were real don't you I would love to be with raphael for ever my second favorite is Leo my 3d is mikey my 4th is Donny text you later bye

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO cute! I love it! It was awesome!

you rule

This was awesome! I couldn't stop laughing and this is really sweet!

Aw, this story was so cute! Loved it!

I am 17 this upcoming April, and technically (to everyone around me) I am considered a grown man. And I am glad to say that even grown men cry. Because that is what I did. You nearly cracked the rest of my band(I am#6)especially where Lucy went to Mikey with a black eye.
You are seriously good chick. Well. If you are a chick. Any way, I'd like to suggest that you detail your surroundings and/or settings a bit more. Other than that, we would seriously like to see you in something big.

Awwww, that was too sweet :D
i had my friend reading over my shoulder as well and the two of us were just awwing at what you had written.

I think you have become a favorite if mine. :D

This is completely adorable and I love it. Its so cute! Please keep writing all your stories. Its all so great :'D

love the story

aw! sweet wasn't it? i really really like it! can you write one-shots for other turtles too?

Awww...thts sweet

That was cute. I'm glad I read it! XD

I've never really liked stories with the turtles and OCs falling in love, but this is reeeaaally cute! Keep writing! (Who knows, you might "turn" other people;))