Okay... Wow. That story and that fucking ending. I need some time to process this...

That was one hell of a story. What a crazy murder mystery. It had insane twists, crazy suspense, love interests and pretty fucking amazing realism. The idea was very original and honestly, the suspense was definitely the best part of the story. It was written really well, I definitely didn't expect the twists. I read the entire thing in one go, holy shit that was tough to put down. The ending was really twisted, Daphne is one stone cold bitch. I don't think anybody envies Harry's position. I like how you had to add the child's reaction as well. That was just fucking cold.
I think one slight detail that might be missing would be the rest of the Hogwarts students. I don't know what happened to the weasleys, longbottom or Granger.

All in all, that was one helluva story. Goddamn! Take my damn favorite. TAKE IT!

This story contains some of the best writing to be found, anywhere. The Harry/Daphne dialog crackles, Harry gets dragged to a magical rave, to jail, to a confrontation with himself. Daphne is just a nasty piece of work, all around. Gosh. It's all very believable, too, in the context of Magical Britain. Highly recommended. Bfd1235813

I don't usually write reviews but this is a phenomenal piece of work Sesc - the quality of writing alone would be good enough but the characters are wonderfully developed, the plot is quite gripping and it's all very tight (not a wasted word).

Your use of suspense as a tool is better than just about anything I've seen, I was almost rushing to get to the end of this. The creativity in the mystery/thriller aspect is also top notch and the way you work around things like the marriage vows and Priori Uti is actually incredibly cool.

I eagerly await reading any more writing out of you, be it further work on incomplete stuff or something else entirely new!

My god 10/10

I can’t believe it took me so long to find and read this. But holy shit that was amazing.

Wasn’t expecting a first person point of view since i rarely encounter them but the way you wrote this remind of that episode from the first season of Star Trek TNG “The Big Goodby(if memory serves me right) with the trench coats and hat...

honestly at the start of the story i didnt think that i would enjoy reading this at all but after a couple chapters i was hooked and this was really amazing might even be one of the best stories ive read on ff great stuff

Three words: I'd, be. Damned!

Definitely one of the best post Hogwarts stories I've read.

Amazing work! Read it in a day straight!

Wonderful. I just saw this and enjoyed its Chandleresque quality. Thanks!

I don't like it and this story is driving me mad right now! What a fucked up premise and what a fucked up wizarding world!

This is a pathetic story! This tick all of the things I expect from an edgy emoish wannabe author!

This story was real sad and weird and violent. Those sisters were really weird and I don't think you know how family is or how they shall act with each other when they love each other like family should. It was really sad to see those drugs and what they did. The wizarding world is so magical and do drugs really belong or are you writing to get closure for your own issues perhaps? I suggest you talk to someone about these things you're writing because you seem to be sad soul with many unresolved personal issues. I hope you can recover and find peace with yourself and dark past. The writing was real good and very high quality but not really or me as it was too dark. I like my stories with good triumphing and happy endings so this was good but too weird for me sorry.

An excellent romp from my main man Serious Scribble. The tight plotting and nuanced characterization made this one funky ride indeed! I used to consider writing a story where Harry is the Holmes to Dudley's Watson, but I don't think I'll bother now as the detective genre has been fully mastered in this story and there's no point having a mediocre scribe like myself having a stab at it, if you'll forgive that murderous pun! Good luck in the future. I'm on to read your other stories now my man and hope this review givves you the inspiration to write many more for the enjoyment of me and the other people frequenting this humble website! Lots of love from Jimmy Jazz!