Reviews for Home Wreckers
FFaddict007 chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
lol. this is funny stuff, can't wait for the next update!
Beth Cyra chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
A very nice first chapter. It looks like you were able to get a really good idea and story going unlike me.

Nao/Mai really takes alot of work to make it flow, but when done right it certainly can be special. I really hope that you are able to keep it up as the first chapter was nice.
angelronin chapter 3 . 7/8/2012
Nao and her mother Hanako have a nice moment together. Nao starting have a fixture on Mai's breasts and enjoy her cooking. Keep up the good work
Spikesagitta chapter 3 . 7/8/2012
Heh :) I like it so far.

Though I must admit...the name of the fic implied something bad will happen down the road.
Spikesagitta chapter 2 . 7/8/2012
Oh ho ho ho...this seem fun :) Mai and Nao huh? I love Nao the most out of the Himes, glad to see her in a fanfic other than the usual Shiznat.
hagancameron chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
Hehehehehe, it is funny.
I don't think I've read this paring before, an I wonder how fast/ how easy it will be for Nao to except that she is attracted.
Or how Mai responds in the future.
TodayParade chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
Amsome chapter and the part with the "marshmallowly" hug hilarious XD
Major Mike Powell III chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1ยบ review, btches!

Now, this was quite nice!

*A* at every moment between Nao and Hanako. So sweet!
Then, I went LMAO at Nao's prank on Mai in the morning. LMAO Mmmmm...mousse...was it choco mousse? :D Omnomnomnom!
Oh yeah, and I can't get enough of Nao talking about Mai's breasts. XD
Next: an adorable moment with some smooches on the cheek. *O*
And finally, Mai's cooking is Epic! Omnomnomnomnomnomnom! XD

I'm RLY enjoyin' this, and it's only on chapter 3! LOL
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Major Mike Powell III chapter 2 . 7/5/2012
Well, well, soldier...

Now, THIS was interesting!

A premise I've NEVAR read before, yesh! And so far, I RLY like it!

It's very nice to read a story where Nao's momma is back together with her. *A*
And of course, D'awwwwwwwww! at Nao being so mellow with her Momma! *O*
Oh yeah, and LOL at Nao describing Mai's bewbs! Mm mm! Mai's breasts are THAT Epic! Resistance is futile! XD

Now, looks like Mai and Nao are gonna be living together from now on, eh?

Oh yeah, this is gonna be good! (Very Evil Smirk)

Mission Start!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
TodayParade chapter 2 . 6/29/2012
Heh great chapter, great length and damn funny!
TodayParade chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Great start to a story with a good cliff-hanger :)
Guest chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
Very cute. I like the premise; it hasn't been done before. The humor was good. The comment about Nao being trapped in Mai's cleavage 'til morning made me laugh. I really liked how you ended the chapter, cutting off Nao's thoughts as she fell asleep.
A little stroke of genius, I think. I'll be looking forward to more of this one.
angelronin chapter 2 . 6/27/2012
Couple of interesting chapters that I had read. Mai sort caretaker for Nao's mom even she just a cook. Nao of her usual self after becoming an adult and taking of her mother after waken from a coma. The scene of them drinking reminding me one of the Mai-Hime drama CD involving Mai, Natsuki, Mikoto, Aoi, Chie and Nao drinking alcohol. Well I wait for the next chapter.