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Amallakin? That's the name you went with?

i just read this whole story in a day and it was fantastic! would love to see more, even little vignettes of the future. you did a terrific job. thanks so much for taking the time to create and write such a great story.

Identical twins have to have the same sex/gender, or else they are not identical. Sex is determined by DNA, identical twins have the same DNA.

I do like the plot, but the action alters so abruptly from scene to scene that it is very difficult to follow.

Another thing that really bothers me is the fact that Palpatine knew enough about the significance of Shmi to find her when Anakin and his sister were so young in the first place, yet he only took one of them. I just cannot accept that he would submit to their owner, let alone leave a potential threat at his back like that.

I like the concept of Anakin having a twin sister and I think it could make an interesting story, but if they were identical then they would be the same gender.

Va bene!

I just finished reading this and your "Caught" story and I have to say - I really enjoyed both of them. I actually liked the way you played with the canon story lines - I liked where you took your ideas, but I felt like you didn't go totally overboard to a place that was unbelievable. Great job on both. Would like like to read more of this story? Heck yes!

I love this Story D

So this is the ending, this is a marvelous story! You write very well, this is one of my all time favorite Anakin redemption/family stories. I hope to read more of your work, keep writing!

Hey, I'm back! So, this is the end? I hope so lol. Put "complete" up there, so you don't fool your readers.
Well, I have a few comments. First, you have to be careful with the contractions and the possessives, "you are" can be "you're", which is different from "your", the same goes with "we're" and "were", and "they're" is not the same thing that "their", right? I'm sure you know these stuff, but you should consider revising some passages.
The story is very well written, but the content gets a little bit repetitive after the Emperor's death. I understood your point, but you could have kept it shorter.
Anyway, I loved reading it, I'll look for more stories in you profile now lol

Doks

Nice well im glade u got better and every guy likes to be called boy toy lol

Seen the obiwan/mally comeing though i wish u could have skiped tarth and this child could be obiwans . though i am sure obi wan will treat her all the same hopefully they will eventualy have a child together

This fanfiction is so beautifully written, I'm afraid of finish it. I am adoring every paragraph. I looked for a story like this for ages and now I have finally found! You write to good for your own good. I'll probably finish this story tomorrow and I'll start begging you for chapters lol
I've been reading fanfictions for years now and I can really tell you: you are really talented. There many terrible stories out there

Well, I'll kiss your ass more when I finish lol

Doks

this has been a lovely story and i am sad that their will not be any more.