Hi!

What?

Umm...

Well ya buffed madara like i asked, but i was hoping it would be one f his actual abiliies, like tengai shinsei, susanoo, chibaku tensei, wood style, summoning the nine tails or something. Kagatsuchi is cool but thats sasuke's thing, not madara's and it isnt flashy enough

Again, read what i said in my review 2 chapters ago, attention, i think he's not only more powerful than Itachi nnd all your fucking godesses combined, but argubly hotter as well (im aa bisexual boy) itachi's hairstyle is to feminine, i could see a girl having hair like that, but not with madara. His spikier hair s more masculine, and does nott include ponytails, but since thiss is beuty and nott trenght, it comes down to preference, but for anyone doubting madara's strenght, feel free to read my review from 2 chapters ago, ill do a short summary here, ten tails madara is god level because hes above kaguya(i explained both why kaguya is god level and why madara is above her in said review) rinnegan madara is stated to be a god EMS edo madara can spam his ms ability because of EMS and infinite chakra and finnal valley madra can summon the nine tails and has hashirama cells ad thus sage mode and naruto with nine tails and sage mode was god level, placing madara well bove itachi ann all your retarded gods, using beerus and rikudo sennin as refrences

Hai! Love your story and all, just one thing, which iss probably autocorrect's faultt but jut wanted to point it out, sometimes what is clearly supposed to be one word is a different one, again, love this story and not trying to hate and its probably autocorrect's fault anyway, and my speling isnt the greatest either. Also one more thing, buff Madara. I would've loved to see him use fire style against that fire guy from the Ikustaka, and he should be fucking god level, no matter which veraion of him(adult of course) ten tails madara has more developped six paths senjutsu and dojutsu than kaguya, who is above galaxy level, so clearly above beerus level, and he's a god. Rinnegan madaara is stated to be god by gaara, and edo EMS madara is invicible if you count ultimaye ninja storm 4 cutscenes as canon, because his ms ability is bascically izanagi but you dont go blind in one eye after using it, so with EMS and infinite chakra from edotensei he should be able to spam it, then we have madara who fought hashirama in the final valley, and he's god level because he still has the previously mentioned ms ability with an ems and even though he dosent have infinite chalra, he now also has the nine tails under his genjutsu and he can summon it at will, so not nly is that a near infinite supply of chakra, he also obtained hashirama cells during the battle, giving himeven more chakra. That also gives him sage mode, and Naruto with sage mode and half of the nine tails chakra was rinnegan madara level/ god level and this madara now has all of the nine tails chakra and sage mode, ao either way, madara should be god level, i understand this is fanfiction, but the majority of the people reading will be in support of the akatsuki, and you wanna plese your readers right?

I'm not crying. no. U are. I'm not . HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THIS

Probably my favorite series of fanfics with an OC ever.

Wait, no. Definitely my favorite. Also, it would be really amazing if you continued it, so if you want to you will make a great deal of people happy.

AAAAAAAH THIS FANFIC MAKES ME SO HAPPY AND NOW ITS ENDING... :(

Thank you so much for writing this! I love how you put a creative spin on the Naruro plot, and you put the supposedly evil characters in a new light! WAAAAAH ITS SO SAD ITS ENDING...sob

Oh well hope you like my hopelessly boring (but true!) review with some odd emotional ness.

Yes, Toni can spell ‘bog’ words, but he can’t spell ‘big’. Wow. I found someone just like me!

Oh and btw anyone who sees this, I think this is a good Akatsuki fanfic as well:

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I think REN is just a leeeeeeeeeeeeeettle bit insane. Don’t you agree?

I used to be really clueless about this Akatsuki, but now, after these 3 Akatsuki books with 3 made up girls that exist only in these stories (*Sob* I’ll miss u guys), I feel like I know the akatsuki and are best friends with them. Wow.

OMG I LOVE MADADESS I KNEW IT WOULD HAPPEN WHOOOOOO THANK YOU AUTHOR YEAHHHHHHHHHH

Sorry if I overreacted. XP

This was an odd chapter. I really don’t know what to say.