Now, I'm dying to see how this story goes when the shirt is eventually blown off. Because he does lose his shirt a few times.

And what does the rest of the crew say to Luffy having that mark, or does he hide it from them, too?

Love it!

good story is it oneshot or multichapter?

I liked it. It's cute!

3 XD

Ace is so over protective! haha

Damn that was actually quite fierce
Keep on the writes

Ahh, this was so cool. Ace was fighting a loosing battle there. I really like the idea of Luffy having the mark despite having his own crew and I really, really, really love this series.

This was so beautiful omg

Hmm, except in little garden; luffy has his shirt burned off. that's probably where you can start with the going merry series.

Whoa. Talk about over-protective. But then again, that's what being the elder one means. Really love this

i wonder what happen what they find out about all the people that attack luffy on his adventure XD and the fact he was almost kill in Loguetown by Buggy.

Luffy doesn't need protection but it would be cool if he had Whitebeard's mark on him. :P
Nice intense one-shot. :)

damn. great one shot. wonder what would happen if his crew saw whitebeards mark on his back?

I really enjoy these. I wonder how long it will take his crew to see it? heh. I look forward to their introduction to the Whitebeard pirates. I'm actually rather surprised that Luffy has the tattoo to begin with.