man , i like this story , i wish it has an update for this one
amazing chapter!

Wonderful wonderful chapter. Truly loved it :D

This chapter and story are absolute love :D

Omg, omg, omg...*utterly melts* :3

Happy endings are love, and this one was sweet and tender :D

A very good story. Incredibly romantic. I'm not usually a fan of the first person, but I thought you made it work. Cheers also to T.A. Blackwell, very sensual final scene. I'm only sorry to see there probably won't be more of it. One tiny note re: Chapter 3. Asari don't have external ears.

This story is absolutely amazing. Can't believe it took me this long to find it and this web site...been living under a rock or something...as always I love everything femshep/ liara only thing I read and this story of them is perfect.

that whole thing was awesome. :)

wow, wow, wow...WOW. I need a cold shower after that chapter!

This story is so eloquently done. The teasing the banter. The sheer sensuality is outstanding. You truly have a beautiful talent. Please continue to write. What a wonderful gift that you so kindly shared with us (the readers) Thank you for sharing.

Absolutely love this, it consoles me after being left bereft from finishing ME3. :)

WOW! What an awesome story. So eloquently done. This speaks of not only physical love but the intensity of two souls becoming one.
Outstanding writing. You both deserve praise.
Of course this does make want marry an asari. LOL

Amazing. I want more.

This chapter is beautifully emotive. Hats off to both of you for an awesome collaboration.

I've never read such a beautiful first person love scene, it had such a flow to it that I could feel the emotion in each action and thought. To understand the emotions that she was feeling and giving to Shepard. Amazingly well crafted love scene. I loved every minute of it. You have a gift and have a way with words that blow my mind, you are an amazing writing and shouldn't doubt yourself.

Love where the story is going and can't wait to see more!