This was a sweet story! Heartbreaking and hopeful at the same time. I'm so glad Steve was the one to find Hermione!

I liked this. Steve and Hermione are both a bit out of their cultural element in modern NYC, and it seems like a classic 'Steve Rogers' kind of thing to do, to courteously ask a crying woman if she needs assistance and try not to scare her more when she over-reacts.

This was really good. I hope you will continue it. I really love Hermione and Steve pairings.

this is cute!

Very sweet.

I loved it. I want the story to continue. A great one shot though.

It was certainly more than Okay although there are lines that require work still: for example, in the middle there are 3 lines next to each other and every one has a word concern in it. So much repetition is never good but overall it is a good effort.

nice :)

brilliant concept!

Omg i am not a crossover person but that was beautifully writen

i didn't realize i shipped it until now. lol i could totally see Hermione with Steve.

Please make it a two shot

I love love loved this SO much and I really hope you do more with this pairing, this story made me want more Hermione/Steve Rogers but unfortunately fandom is lacking in it. Anyway, thank you for this!

So far so good. I think for a first part you captured Steve well enough. But further interactions with Hermione are needed. Would love to see a sequel, even if it is a one sot.

Awww poor Hermione :(