I really liked it, please continue

You need to have more faith in your writing.
I apologize for not reading this sooner.
It is very nice, and I see improvements from the first chapter c:
-Vicky

oh man i wanna know what happens next D: cant waitt :3

Kinda to lazy to log in but, loved the chappy! Looking forward to the next chappy!

Aw they are not horrible, plus I very much like this so far it has something that really keeps you reading.

Awesome story. i love it so far.

Yo this was really cool.

TLDR.

But it was amazing. x3

I shall read the rest when I can be bothered x3

More more more more more more more-
You told me chapter 2 is in progress, it needs to be uploaded
Now, I must give some nice criticism. While I like this story, I think the events are happening too quickly and that it needs to be spaced out somehow; either with more dialog, having a more detailed description for everything, or maybe even a mix of both. (Trust me, I have a problem with that too :/)
This is absolutely nice though, and I would like to read more. By the way; using Sho as the math teacher was completely brilliant xD
Vicky

please update soon

I loved the story! It was amazing!

This isnt a crappy story! I like it quite much :) and i like how its Mum instead of Mom x) update soon!

I wouldnt say it was crappy. It kinda jumped from one the next a little quick but it was pretty good. :)

Ah, poor Roxas T.T

Great job, I loved this chapter!

this looks intersting, cant wait for more