I don't know if you'll even see this, as the story here is so many years old now...
But thanks. I read each chapter many times.
You've inspired me to write my own version of what happened, and make my own account here (Tali and Shep, of course :)
It's not posted yet..but will be as soon as I finish the first chapter.
I loved your story. You did an amazing job.
Wherever you are, whoever you are...
Thank you.
For that happy ending we never got to see...
And from me personally.
Really, thanks.

Good, very good. Just one thing. WHY ALL THE WINKING?

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Good story, even after all this time it’s still being read :)

Um, just a note, but water is already levo/dextro. The filtration process would be just removing chiral plant life from the water ... which should be done anyway. Sanitation is a *must* for drinking/washing water.

Sorry to interrupt, please continue!

You need to totally publish a book dude! Thatd be awesome.

Well done, being a fellow Talimancer, I definitely enjoyed this story, hope to see more.

Holy hell i have only read the first bloody paagraph and already i want to read more. Damn dis shit is gud

Bioware should have hired you for a mass effect 3 movie as of shepherd's choices and the end brought a tear to my eye(anyone who wants to hate on me for sissy or something go right ahead I won't bloody respond) good day or eavining to all of you. Eat A Dick Bioware this guy gave meaning to your shit endings

The best damn ending one could ask for

Your mShali is so freakin cute

Alright, nice, brief little prologue here that starts off where the third game ended. I like that better than going through the final moments like some people may do. At least Shepard appears to be in good humor. About the only thing I could add to it is if he were to think about his friends. Are they okay? Stuff like that. Other than that it seemed fairly realistic. On Hackett's part, having him order everyone to stay away from the Reaper corpses seem like a good call so good addition there. I see you chose the destroy ending. Poor geth. Not much else to say on this chapter since it was fairly short. Everything read well. No errors that I could see as I read it. All in all good stuff. I look forward to reading more.

Hahahaha, Garrus would be such a player.

two more weeks?!

Yes, I'm sure Tali has quite the giggle ...

god, it's so weird to hear Shepard calling someone "Mom."

Lol, Admiral Cutie, reporting for duty.

"What was Admiral Xen even for"
NOTHING! XD

man, quarians' quariacentrism really gets on my nerves, sometimes :P