| Reviews for Drop in Reality |
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The beginn of Red Dawn chapter 1 . 7/16 I have to say one of, if not, the best story I've ever read. Have not read anyone who tried to help Shego with technology and not with training. The idea behind it is really simple and still really great. The only pity is that there are so few chapters. |
shthar chapter 9 . 6/29 I like this. A lot of the evil ron stories just seem to forget about yamanuchi. I mean, he's The Chosen One. He sez jump, they say 'How Hi?' |
shthar chapter 6 . 6/29 I was thinking when the suit was described, automatically explodes when something hits it? Why don't I just throw a bucket of BBs at her? |
Mindless Violence Fan chapter 2 . 2/16 I just found this masterpiece. I LOVE Evil Kim and Evil Ron stories. there are too few of them and most are one dimensional and don't give the characters much depth. You're succeeding on making Evil Kim so bad that Shego is now terrified of her. Didn't Shego learn with Ron? Using the attitudinator is like eating a box of chocolates - you never know what you're going to get. Now that Kim has her brainwaves flipped and has no internal governors to control her, she is a true terror. It's nice to see that your Evil Kim wants Ron to be evil so she can have the Mother OF All Fights. Evil Ron knows he can't beat Kim man-on-man, so he has to come up with his own death traps to stop this Kim. Fantastic! Nice to see the tracking chip referenced here. If Ron ever becomes good again, he's going to have trust issues with Kim, Wade and Anne for sticking the chip in him, no matter how noble the reason. I predict lots of violence, property damage, damaged friendships, fractured nations and maybe a few deaths along the way of this journey. Just do me this favor and make Shego realize releasing the Evil in Kim is the biggest mistake she's ever made. I will now trudge on and read further chapters. Here's hoping you have enough time and positive reinforcement to continue this tasty treat you've generously given the KP community. Once again, I love Evil Kim and Evil Ron stories and yours is the best one I've read. Good job. |
Guest chapter 10 . 2/14 Hot dame you are back please update soon! |
Guest chapter 9 . 6/11/2018 I liked it. It was interesting. I hope I get to see how it plays out |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/14/2015 I was hesitant at first to read this story. but I got completely sucked into it and by the time I had noticed I had finished all you had written. excellent story. |
Shego Fan 7 chapter 9 . 1/3/2015 Great story! I look forward to the next update. |
Smiling Seshat chapter 2 . 12/7/2014 Minor typo: You wrote 'franticly' instead of 'frantically'. |
Smiling Seshat chapter 1 . 12/7/2014 I feel that Ron should feel a bit more conflicted when she kisses him when she's evil. He should feel bad that Kim has to have been turned evil to put that much passion into the Relationship. If I were him, I'd be thinking that meant the original relationship wasn't as good as previously thought. |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/21/2014 I absolutely love this story...I think I've only liked one portrayal of zorpox better, and that wasn't the shows...please keep them coming |
Silvereye-BW chapter 9 . 11/19/2014 Awesome. Ron's got Yori on his side. |
JPElles chapter 9 . 11/16/2014 I like Yori. Good to see this. And hopefully Yori and eventually Sensei will see this Ron good or evil isn't "Evil". After all even evil he doesn't want to kill anybody for no reason, or take over the world and rule as a dictator. I'm sure going forward Sensei will see just how dangerous the new Kim is. Curious where this goes. Rather than the normal Ron making use of his repressed talents in favor of helping Kim, or just being lazy. Will this be the darker Ron going the other way and getting in touch with the good qualities of his former lazier self? If it is it is the first attempt at that I think. Keep it up. Ron just needs one more girl and he has his own angels. :) |
Joe Stoppinghem chapter 9 . 11/16/2014 I'm sorry to see not more reviews for this story. It is very well written, good balance between dialog and narration. I can't wait for this to continue, I am wondering when the evil Kim and evil Ron go at it. Plus will Hana be an unknown factor in this story? Thank for the time and effort you've put in for this. |
etyberz chapter 9 . 11/14/2014 Great chapter! Some many pieces, but one variable can shatter the strategy! I look forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work! |