spełniło moje pokładane w tym nadzieje

No i odnaleźli się a teraz się w sobie zagubią i będzie pięknie

fajny ten brat, młody i dorośle patrzący

ten pojedynek słowno emocjonalny między nimi podkręca napięcie, czekam aż odkryją swoje karty

This was absolutely beautiful and I love it even more now than I did the frist time I read this. So happy to be able to read it again. Tysvm.

Great job! It was so sweet and cute.

I loved this story,yes, please do more it was fun to read.

Hahaha OH god that was a great ending to a chapter

This story is so good! Thank you!

This was so great- I didn't want it to end!

Sarah at 14 was "incomplete" and she is "so much more nowI love those words!

Ah yes, the classic shaving question haha. You know I haven't had the time keeping energy for reading fanfics for a long time. I think this is the first time I have delved into and gotten hooked on a laby fic for ages! I just read four chapters in a row! You write their little dance so well, it's very sexy.

Ahhhh of course he nails the song! Yes he is amazing! Love it. Your personality for Toby and his mates is genuine and fantastic, too. They sound like SUCH teenagers without it being corny.

Okay I am loving this. The whole 'Jareth's coming to dinner as the new bf ' scene seems really fresh with this take. You write them both so well. I can feel Sarah's age, and Jareth's torment, and the subtle feelings going unsaid between them for now. It's a lovely tension.

Awesome start! I love their back and forth banter already. Although how Sarah thinks she's getting any sleep with a sexy Goblin King on her couch is beyond me!