I like the idea and the plot and wished it had keot on going. it was very interesting and different compared to most fanfictions. I just wish that the story was longer or rather that you spent more time developing the characters and the backgrounds of the characters. I think the characters are the most important part of the story. One cries for the characters not the situations or plot line.I hope you keep on writing. If you ever want to rewrite this story and add to its depth I will gladly read it.

sincerely,
Imogene

I luv D Gray Man

Wow bad combo right there... Lol that is what i get gorey reading a fic staged in the triwizard where Harry trash Talked the Horntail! And then a demonic Harry who practically fucked himself... yep a bad combo but an awesome at that! Update!

Very nice.

Bet the Inner circle didn't see that one coming.

oh... well that was rather gory and detailed... i liked it... definitely interesting... really dark.

yes thanks! the little bit at the beginning helped me immensely! this chapter was pretty interesting, about to read the next one!

YES! OH MAN YES! i bloody love it i love blood and okay... im in love with JJ now damn you evil creature but thanks hahahahahaha now this is what i call slashing the borders hehehehehhehehe updaaaaaaaaaaaaate

Holy fuck you killed Harry... you bastard lol south park the words aren't exact but you get the joke hehe but... u killed Harry how can you do that? So mean lol UPDATE!

I am so confused

Oh, that's bad. Tom is going to lose it.

Going to be interesting to see what happens now.

Update!

Please continue, this is so so good! Thanks!

Keep it up! I want more Tom and Harry!

Scottish:

hm... who is this mysterious JJ?