Reviews for Harry Potter and the Power of Paranoia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I burst out laughing at the end. Ah, I'm gonna fucking die |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good future Harry. Thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really Good Story! I know it’s mainly meant to be humorous, but parts of it really made good sense! I was especially struck by the “omake” chapter, it was all true! Why had I never thought about it before?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i didn't even feel i was nearing end of story... thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() Dumbledores bound - Dumbledore's bound |
![]() ![]() I wish you would add a scene where he talks about his time at university, your timeskip after he moved to America was way too big, I would have loved to see him attend university and progressing in his relationship with Luna. Without that, it weakens the connection to the character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for making a dickish version with a level of complexity that threw me for a loop during the second reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fairly good story. Read it in 2 days. I like fics where Harry says screw destiny and goes off to do whatever he wants. I gotta say Luna did seem a little OOC if I'm being honest. She's a bit of an odd case I've found when it comes to fanfiction. People write her in many different ways and I rarely like how they made her. I also think this fic was very anticlimactic. Voldemort killed by accident, Harry having his horcrux removed in a physical, Dumbledore being knocked out. It just felt dull. |
![]() ![]() Sam Vimes, 'The Watch' storylines books, Terry Prachett's 'Discworld'-verse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sort of wished that Harry died in the end. Good story, but I never liked a smug coward. Cowards are fine, but when it's a smug coward who has everything going in his direction, I would love for nothing but to see their downfall. Wished that Horcrux would have stayed in, so that Harry cannot run from his fate. Ah well, I rate this story a decent Bashing/10. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He's not Micheal. He's utterly bonkers - off his head! He wants to still rope Harry into being a pawn in a game Harry Potter clearly isn't playing. Like, WTF Dumbles? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the ending! Have re-read this several times! Such a great Fic |
![]() ![]() I HAS DIED FROM THE LAUISZES HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA |
![]() ![]() well then...Harry certainly changed a lot of things hasn't he! |