When's the next chapter?!

When's the next chapter? And this is a really good story!

I can't wait for the next chapter I love this story!

Please continue this

(Hi, I'm TGirl15 but I used to be known as TGirl but I changed the name and now I am known as TGirl15. Just a heads up sometimes my computer can act a bit funny when I'm typing, so if there's any missing words in a sentence, words type wrong or if some sentences in the review doesn't make any sense then it's my computer acting up.)

I know it's been a while since you worked on this story and your technically on hiatus with this, but I ensure you that I am still a loyal fan that just love your story and hope that you don't give up on this amazing story.

The story lines in your story is full of action, adventure, mystery, comedy, suspense and a bit of touching moments(especially in the technically love triangle between the Princess and the young lords.) Who would love this story and defined that will happen next.

So far the beginning of the story, Merida was enjoying life after the so-called bear incidents she had when she was fighting for her freedom to choose her own path in life and the right to marrying for love in her(and the young lords) own time instead of being force into marrying one of the Lord sons from the other clans. Then out of nowhere dealing with a Dragon and later finding out(after the run-in with the Dragon) letters from the three clans leaders claiming that each of their son's has developed an interest (a.k.a. fallen in love with) the Princess wishes to spend more time with her that later on she to would have fallen in love with one of them and finally once and for all claim one of the young lords had win her heart.

A surprising twists that they all have been given false information. that the three clans have received fake letters claiming that the Princess has somehow fallen in love with their firstborn sons and the Royal family the exact opposite information. When Merida thoughts that nothing else can get even more confusing, a mysterious figure that both Merida parents thought they would never run into again, comes back claiming that he was the one who sent those fake letters, to gather the clans in one place so he could kidnap the Queen for his own and use powerful dark magic to turn mostly everyone in the kingdom(except for the princes and the young lords) to stone.

Leaving Merida and the young lords to work together to rescue /save the Queen, say their clans and the kingdom. All determined to save their loved ones all for them venture off into the woods to start your journey. And so far they managed to run into monsters in the forests, run into the Witch, but valuable information about Ambrose, got a few spells bottles(that Wee Dingwall bought from the Witch.), And so far spent a night in a cave.

To make this story even more dramatic the young lords to find Merida sick with a serious illness and the three young lords are determined to find a cure for the Princess the matter what. It's especially nice to see that young Macintosh is actually putting others before his own or in this case Merida. So now young Macintosh and Young McGuffin set off in the woods filled with magical monsters(by the way great description of the monsters that you used from the brave game, I love that game the game is awesome.) While wee Dingwall stay behind to take care and keep an eye on Merida.

So far in the story in Ambrose had some flashbacks back when he and Fergus were great friends till the day they were suitors competing for Merida mother's hand and the day they both ended up falling in love with her.

Talk about a bit ironic, because Merida and the young lords are in the same predicament as well. Except to Merida she doesn't realize how the young lords truly feel for her, sure their first impression with her wasn't really great sense one of them(Young Macintosh) is completely arrogant and have a bit of a temper when things don't go his way, then(Young McGuffin) is completely shy, kind and sweet also strong but no one can understand what on earth what he's saying and lastly (Wee Dingwall) is a bit of a daydreamer, hard to read and definitely unpredictable.

They all may be different in their own way, but it seems that their heart is on the same subject when it comes to Merida. Yep the Princess definitely got a lot to deal with plus being unaware of the young lords true feelings towards her(since those three are definitely in love with the same girl in this case being Merida).

The story is amazing and your creativity is incredible because there's so many exciting things as happening and I know for fact many fans can't wait to find yellow will happen next. With a race against time will young Macintosh and Young McGuffin will be able to find a cure for Merida?, where what will the wisp's lead them to?, Will more flashbacks of Ambrose pass which the Fergus and the Queen will be revealed and will not be any more romantic moments between Merida and the young lords? Also what any of the young lords finally admit/realize their true feelings for the Princess.

I am a loyal fan that really hope you continue to story and don't give up, your an amazing writer and I know you will get your creativity back sooner or later and the next chapter will be amazing so until next update your fan TGirl15.

PS. I know the holidays are over already and everyone is mostly looking forward for the new year but I hope you had a happy holidays and I hope you have a great new year in 2015.

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Oh, I hope you conjur up some old inspiration. I would really like to continue reading the story. You are a gifted writer and that it was makes the story so enjoyable

I'm sorry, I just found this terribly awkward to read. Your sentences don't flow very well, your grammar is sub-par, and your use of exclamation points is awkward and frequent. You also miss apostrophes many times in ways that confuse the reader. You also seem to be switching tenses mid-sentence.

This really does have potential, but if you could just get a beta reader, or just revise the first chapter (I'm afraid I won't be reading on to see if this gets better) it could be excellent.

Will you finish this ? Its brilliant :D

So jealius right now, hope my brave fanfics were this good. Keep up the good work and please try to update ASAP :)

Happy new year 2013 :) and guess what Disney pixar brave won as best animated Feature film in the golden globe awards yes it just awesome right? i just wanted to let you know. i still love your story and i am a loyal fan that hope that you have a awesome new year and that you continue this story and update ch:8 as soon as you can please. :)

Hey, I'm really enjoying this. Can you continue this? Please? Soon?

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(0o0) Awsome! I found this spectacular story from some fan art that 'yuramec' did on DA. Your story is such a wonderful one, I love it! (0o0)

Please!please! Finish this one and create another stories! Maybe its more about queen rlinor and merida..please! You're such a good writer!:)))