Hate it. If they were soul mates he would never of left and said bad stuff about her

Darien is a cunt saying those yhings abouts her. Je has no right yo comment now

Well that was a really interesting story, it was sad and funny. I cried when Serena keep yelling at Derek and calling him a liar and so forth. I couldnt help laugh at some weird stuff, which was great. Great work. Also the ending wa so funny when Mina realized Serena left with the car. Great work.

This was a very well written story I loved it.

like the ending when Mina says "wait I don't have a car"

Kawaii. I loved this chappy. Keep it up. email me at or at when you update your stories or do a sequel to your stories.

I have read this story a few times before, and I came back all pissed off from school and didn't feel like reviewing, so here it is. I loved this story. If you happen to do a sequel or update your stories, email me at or

oh wow that is sooooooooo cute!

OMG! That was SO sweet! I loved the ending. What I meant was that I loved the part when Sere and Dare get together. But the part when Mina celebrates is good as well. Um I g2g. So bye!

I love this story it is great you are a talented writer :)

Loved it! Well done!

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That was such a good story, you use description really well. I like happy endings :-)

wow sooo sweet and very new typish..lol

A truly unique story. The sucidal part was very creative... I enjoyed it immensely. Though I do believe you could continue on with the story. I'm sure there could be so many more twists and turns in this story with no doubt. Or you could take the path that you are on at the present moment, short and sweet.