Reviews for Immortal Punishment
Guest chapter 28 . 3/26
loved this!
Whit96 chapter 28 . 9/11/2019
So good! But what happened to the ring?
Whit96 chapter 12 . 9/11/2019
Love it so much so far.
Guest chapter 28 . 3/24/2019
Love.
lizzie08 chapter 1 . 1/2/2018
This was amazing! Love it!
Pitch Black Outlet chapter 20 . 7/31/2017
Oh— that went well. But there's still an obstacle. Oh, bugger!
Pitch Black Outlet chapter 19 . 7/31/2017
ah! Snape. It's thrilling but can't stop cursing his name in this. Why do you have to be on the picture. They got other people to deal with and you're there, plotting. What a bloody twist.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2017
This is a wonderful story, love it.
sophia.pena436 chapter 1 . 3/21/2017
this story is really great, but one thing that really annoys me when reading it are the song lyrics. they're always at the end of like every paragraph and i cant even figure out how those particular lyrics are connected to the text. like the word COLD. i see it all the time and i just really find it hard to understand why it has to be there in that particular scene. just saying.
SusanMarieS chapter 28 . 4/22/2016
Amazing story
4thkage chapter 1 . 3/18/2016
wow...reincarnation...in same body...having past memories...
nice intro...
Me chapter 8 . 3/7/2016
I know it's probably a bit late for this, but I figured I'd review anyway. I'm really enjoying this and I love the whole idea behind it but there are a few historical inaccuracies. Victorian England wasn't until the 1800s and they didn't use thee and thou in the late 1700s and beyond. Also, when you want to say your, you would use thine instead of thou. Besides that, this fic is great :)
anidot90 chapter 28 . 10/13/2015
Wow! I have read Fallen by Lauren Kate, and this is different. That book was more about the romance, but this has mystery. I will admit I skipped over the flashbacks with the past lives, I wanted to know about Draco and Hermione in the current time. But this was a wonderful story, and an anti-snape one too! I never came across one like that before, almost all dramione has him being a good person. So that was interesting!
RoseAlone chapter 6 . 8/21/2015
I love your fic, but your 'old time-y' grammar is driving me crazy! People stoped saying thou and thee (except for some remote parts of northern England) in the 1600's, so hannelore and race wouldn't use them (love both those names by the way). It's thou art, not thou is, that would be like saying you is. Tis means it is so Hannelore is basically saying "he it is not yet satisfied". When Rafe said "Thou husband" he's saying 'you husband' in modern terms, it should be 'thy husband'. I really do enjoy your fic, but I had to get that out of my system. I suppose it's my misfortune to be the only archaic grammar nazi in existence.
zombiekins5948 chapter 28 . 7/28/2015
So beautiful. Please make more updates
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