OMG! I was looking for a story of this kind! Thank you so much for this! It was really good! :)

Awe that was adorable

XD This was freakin awesome!

Sweet and sensible. I liked how you managed to put so much plot into such a short story, which is something I have yet to master. Fun read, thank you. .

That's the funniest line in the whole piece! "Where the fuck is my car?" Loved it!

Also loved the rest of the piece

Love and good Readging/Writing

NeoCortex

I like this!