Good story

Why do these type of stories always do that? She has not always loved Edward, she has been ATTRACTED to him.

I know it really isn't that serious in the grand scheme but I prefer honesty.

'I love her, but don't deserve her.' I'm so over these type of lines... He has always been there for Bella.. ALWAYS.

I mean sure but at the same time, the guy is doing so much for her.

'She doesn't blame jake'

Even if she didn't love him, she didn't cheat on him, in fact, it was just cheating, that implies a fling.. He had a whole affair for a long period of time.

If Edward knew about it for a month and never said anything... I think that's retarded... He doesn't owe Jake time, he either tells Bella within the week or he will, there, simple and done.

This was a beautiful story! I loved it all!

"You're confession in a national interview..." YOU'RE is the contraction for YOU ARE. He's not saying "YOU ARE confession in a national interview..." He's saying "YOUR (belonging to you) confession in a national interview..." How can you - or your beta - not know this? ? ?

"You're going to need you're strength" YOU'RE is the contraction for YOU ARE. I don't suppose he's saying "YOU ARE going to need YOU ARE strength," right? It's "YOU'RE going to need YOUR strength." (I don't understand how you don't know the difference between YOU'RE and YOUR, considering what a skillful writer you are.) And while I'm ranting, IT'S is the contraction for IT IS or IT HAS. ITS is the possessive form. For example: "It's amusing to watch a dog chase its tail."

Thanks for writing this wonderful story!

"Your welcome." It's YOU'RE, the contraction for YOU ARE.

Thank you for this beautiful story!

Such a great story! Loved it the whole way thru.

Are we finally getting to a declaration?

It doesn't seem like much can happen in this location.