This has to be the saddest yet amazingly well written story that I've ever read about the two brothers :) I like this pairing even thought people are like oh they're brothers that's wrong ! But fanfics like these are the ones that make come back to this pairing. Thankfully Noatak didn't have to go through that but somehow this how I imagine it, also I love how you captured their personality and their bromance. Like how Noatak says that Tarrlok was actually the strongest and not weak for standing his ground and still being caring for their mother. You should keep writing xD this story made me nearly cry, I guess I always had a soft spot for the two even if they turned out to be jerks and psychos.

You did a fantastic job. Please write more Naotock/ Tarlock.

This is just perfect; it explained what the show couldn't. Nice job ;)

It's really sad that Noatak and Tarrlok's relationship ended in tragedy, but I guess that's what makes it memorable.

This is beautifully written and Yakone for corrupting his sons with bloodbending.

Wow, this was a wonderful story that was short and bittersweet. I really liked the way you explained Noatak's personality change from when they were boys. The episodes never really addressed that issue and were a bit weak in explaining it, but I feel like your interpretation of his growing detachment, though sad and terrible, was effective. Please write more about Noatak and Tarrlok, I feel like you have a pretty interesting viewpoint of them (and I just really like those beautiful brothers.) Keep up the awesome work!