This is a really good material, considering a change or fresh new pace to the series. But i'm curious, are you going to make a new route on your own style or youre gonna stay on Hanako route?

Come on man, what are you doing? You just going to start this and not finish it? Write more!

Seriously enjoying the work here. I started it last night and read it all in about 3 hours or so. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!. I can vividly picture a lot of the stuff you're describing, and the content is really excellent! :-) Please keep it up!

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*Dies an honorable dead while facing the greatest adversary imaginable...
ROFLing*

Oh, and if I could describe this chapter in one word it would be...
MOAR!

Great story, really really loving it, can't wait for the next chapter to come out! :3

I just, I... This story is FUCKING AWESOME! I was listening to the Halo 3: ODST soundtrack whilst reading, and it makes it that much better (as a sidenote, a really dramatic and high paced song just kicked in).

Welcome Back man! ;)

This was good, I enjoy it a lot. I wish you'd update more frequently, though I know that writing stories isn't like reading them, and most definitely isn't a one and done ordeal.

I found this to be a great little gem of a fic. Was delightful to read, finished it in one sitting, and I can't wait for the next installment. Hopefully that will be soon! Other than the occasional grammar or spelling error this is very well written. I think you write the original Katawa characters quite well and I have found Andrew to be quite believably written. I honestly feel like I am playing a secret character playthrough of the game. Anyways, I enjoyed and you're awesome
Cheers

Nice. Glad you're back!

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Well goddamn. When I started reading this about six hours ago, I didn't think I'd get into it that much, because I judge books by their covers. Now here I am, greatly anticipating the next chapter of this truly extraordinary fanfiction. I'm very curious as to what will happen next, and I am hopeful I will know.
This is a great story, with grammatical errors, word misspellings, and cases of words missing in a sentence. These traits make this story seem actually, truly made by a single person, without the help of a machine. These traits are both good, and bad.
Again, I am greatly anticipating the next chapter to come, and I thank you for writing such an amazing story.
WarbirdHD out!

DUUUUUUUUUUUDE, NO!
Why would you leave that as a cliffhanger?!
That was not cool man!

(It's a good chapter don't get me wrong, plus it's really well written).

WHY THERE MAAAAAN?!

Ahh, a week is too long! :-o haha that was a great chapter, and it's great to see you back. Looking forward to the next one! Keep up the awesome-ly amazing work! :-)
Pamphy :-)

Awesome chapter.

Okay holy cow! I've just read through the entire thing up to this point. This... This is too good. I'm really impressed with the length, something that always drags me in, but the depth and detail you're using is amazing. From many of your forwards, I understand you don t get many reviews, so I'd like to say that this is fantastic. Can't wait to read more, whenever that may be. Keep up the great work!
Pamphy :-D