so, Hojo is basically Naraku. .. though I expect Naraku to also be Kaguras brother...

:snortsnon-alcoholic long Island ice tea." you mean she had a regular ice tea,with a bit of lemonade? it's called an Arnold Palmer. if you take the alcohol out of a long Island, you get about a shot of sour mix, and a splash of coke.. a long Island is almost all alcohol ... and only tastes like tea. ..

OMG inupapa is such a girl lol

I really like their father in this. he's so funny

Oh jeez, I just want Hojo to die now. Anyone who messes with Kagome's happiness doesn't deserve to live. Sesshomaru misunderstood the whole situation and doesn't even know what happened. He just arrived there and then when he saw that man Hiroshi standing so close to her automatically assumed that she cheated. Sesshomaru totally made an ass out of himself.

Realmente me gusto.
Pero hay varios errores, kagome tiene los ojos marrones brillantes como kikio no azules como al final de la historia.
Después seshomaru comento que si apareaba una miko del calibre de kagome la convertiría en yokai o le saldrían rasgos demoniacos y no ocurrió. Con los nuevos cachorros el primogenito sera varón dicen. Pero rin es la primogenito no entiendo. Es porque con kagura solo se caso y no se apareo como con ksgome supongo que sera por eso. Y varias cosas así. Así que quitando eso lo disfrute.

Dios, esto fue hermoso

I'm so happy that I could die right now. I love Sessh-Kag moments. Thank you so much. I love you...

This was really good! Thank you for sharing!

Amazing story, i loved it. Its was great

I am liking the story alot, its great

This story was amazing from start to finish. I absolutely loved it! Devastated that it's over though...

Inuyokais's first born are male, but and Rin?

I am really confused with one thing. Does Rin exist or not? In one chapter Inu no Taisho don't have grand pups, in the next chapter There is Rin. And now, the inuyasha's son is the first grand pup. Please. Help me.

I love your story ! But you need to fix chapter 29 :)