Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I love them!
Hotsuma cant be angry with Shusei xD

Simply adorable :)

This is freaking adorable :3 Good Job XD

I really like HotsuShu fanfics. And I like all of your fanfics. (feels like a stalker, -.-')

When I write a story I find it sometimes difficult and lose motivation because I lack inspiration... so how about some new storyideas: I give you some words and hope you win some writing inspiration...of course you don't have to use it. I'm just trying to help.

ideas: hmm...

Uraboku charas making a trip... to the mountains...lots of snow... maybe during christmas holidays? with gifts (Hotsu making a cute handmade gift for Shu? a scarf?), and lot of food and drinks, and people getting drunk...for example Shusei accidently by eating an alcohol-cake xD (has he ever been drunk? no?xD) hmm.. and snowboarding? Hotsu learns snowboarding...or he already is a pro-snowboarder?...or something like that...

somebody gets lost in the forest when it's dark, cold and stormy outside! (Hotsuma searching for Shusei -drunk Shusei?-without Gods eyes)[ANGST]... haha okay I think that's enough for the moment xD if I continue I won't be able to stop anymore and it gets ridiculous...if it isn't already xD

I acutally don't know where this idea came from...and I don't know if somebody has ever written a similar fanfic... If not I hope somebody will once - not me since my English SUCKS -.-'

Whatever, good luck at writing!

Hey, not going to repeat your own verdict but maybe you should try a different approach to the whole Hotsuma/Shuusei relationship. Why not try some black humour or even a parody of the series? I think it's great that you're getting back into writing again, though you seem to lack passion in the story you just wrote, which doesn't do you intentions any justice. Brainstorm! Write some unfunny angst if you have to :)

Hey do not be discouraged by the lack of writing, so keep it up... _ pleaseeeeeer...

By the way the story was really really good

I love hatsumo and shusei stories

There so cute -_-