please update

Samara is roughly 1000 years old because she is a matriarch

Please update this story it is awesome and very well told but Samara is roughly

Good and plz update

The way you worded your Author's note at the beginning suggested that there wouldn't be any other chapters after this, yet I see an incomplete story, and a story that also isn't marked as complete. I hope that you continue this, even with all the spelling mistakes.

goddamn thats fucking awesome bro

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Interesting story, I do hope you continue it but there is an issue or two with it. Number 1 being how could Naruto possibly know Samara when she was younger. Unless in this story humans have been in space much longer than in canon. Samara is a matriarch, her daughters are all several hundred years old. There is no way for him to have known Samara as a child. I will go with Naruto knowing Shepard, Kasumi, Jack and Tali. Hell even Mordin I can see. I don't see him knowing Thane or Samara though.

Regardless. I look forward to you continuing this story.

This is fucking terrible. Like seriously fuckng terrible. He can't know every person in the fucking galaxy. It's literally impossible.

well it sucks that this is only two chapters it has the potential to be a great story.

Wow! Major grammar issues! I couldn't finish reading this.

Hmm..
You realize a one-shot means that the story is one chapter long, right?
Lol.
You need to work on suffixes.
-s, -ed, -er, -ly, etc. As an example.. Let me find an error...
Here you go:
This is how you did it: Finally, they use him for power. With plans of a proto-human reaper, they use him.
This is the grammatically correct way: Finally, they used him for power. With plans for a proto-human Reaper, they used him.
See, there's a big difference between use, and used. When you use something, you're(Or someone else is) using it NOW. Right now. When you say 'used' it means you(Or someone else.) have already used it. See the difference? Its Past, present, and future. The past version of use: Used. The present version:Use. THe future version: Will Use. See? It works similarly with some other words, though they use -ly, and several other suffixes instead.
Just google them.
It seems obvious to me that English wasn't your first language.
That's alright. No worries. Russian, I'm guessing, was your first. I could be horribly wrong, of course, but its just a guess.
Just try working on suffixes.
Or get a beta. Either one would work.
Its possible that you had no idea what I just said.
Just google suffixes and look around. I'm sure you'll be able to find something.

well hope you keep going

nice hope its updated soon

certainly looks interesting and would like to see more and it if you can write this well it could be really good