I love your lines about their "propensity towards vengeance and violence" and Amon's "sick, vicious pleasure of cutting his puppets by their strings". These descriptions are just bang-on, and even more heart-wrenching when just a few paragraphs later you deliver those last lines. The contrast and the feelings you conjure are incredible. This piece was wonderful.

Very poetic and emotional. You did a wonderful job of capturing that heartbreaking moment in the tv series!

I taught I was ready to read a fanfic about them. You got me again. Awesome Story. You captured them beautifully. Now please excuse while I go cry some more...

Really beautifully written, you captured their emotions quite well. Loved it!

So sad. :( Nicely written.

Geez, that hurt! Ha! What a lovely piece of fiction gfdhughdfug

Man that was so sad. I imagined that entire scene as if the ending theme was playing in the background. So sad...

This made me cry in the finale, and you managed to get me again. Beautifully written!

No, too soon after watching it... so sad...

Still, this was one of my favorite scenes of the whole finale, and your background to it was interesting. I liked the line about how he had never not been able to control water. Overall well done, thoughtful and sad.