Good story

Why did you decide to stop publishing your fics here?
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Phew! I just got an Ao3 account finally, glad I did so now I can add you to my subscription list! *goes to Ao3*

Oh no ! it's so good. I mean the senario is great, i love the time travel and the way Yugi revisits the Heba's life. I wonder how is it that the Pharaoh have Yami's memories. Mana is very funny, I find her adorable and cute. I laughed a lot while reading. I look forward to know if Yugi will return to his world or if he will save Egypt by following the prophecy. Too many unanswered questions, I can not wait to have the sequel and also to see Yugi and YamiPharaoh's together. I love the moment where they are accomplices, and the small references that have a link like the earring I always find the small details cool.
I encourage you for the future.

I think I may have accidently submitted a review before it was ready... the perils of typing on a glitchy phone! I meant this review for ch12, but if I can't leave it there, I'll leave it here.
Anyways, in case the previous unfinished review doesn't post, I was saying that I like Ancient Egypt AUs and this is the most interesting I've read yet. The plot really seemed to pick up after Yugi ended up in Heba's body, and I was shocked that Yugi just immediately told people he wasn't quite who they thought he was! I was almost expecting him to keep quiet, but I liked how that played out.
I also like how this opens up the character interacts so that they can be honest, but how the confusion of Atem/Yami and Yugi/Heba seemed to result in that strange dream Yugi had. Mana is also just so adorable, and I love how she, Atem, and Heba/Yugi share that earring together - and I especially love the earring that Atem and Heba share! There's some great character interaction there, and the funny moments - Yugi flying out that window! - are adorable.
Regardless of if you ever continue or not, this was a fun and interesting read, and I really enjoyed it. Afternoon well spent! Thanks for sharing, op.

This was really quite enjoyable to read! I like Ancient Egypt AUs and this is the most interesting spin that I've seen on that so far. I thought the plot really picked up when Yugi transported/time-travelled to Egypt an

it's been a while since you updated bUt I just finished ygo a few days ago and therefore just found this fanfiction, so I wanted to review anyway! (plus ur profile says ur still writing too)
I just really, really like this story? I'm laughing along whenever they tease each other and groan and it's just making me feel things? I'm also a little glad it's not about the slave/ pharaoh dynamic I've seen in many other fics, so that counts as bonus too!
The ending of this chapter is more than just a little torturous but I can deal with that, and while I don't want to stress you (as a writer myself, I know how hard it is to continue long projects) I want to say I'd definitely read the next chapter when you post it! long waits are not something that make me give up a fic - so I want to say, as a ending note - thank you for picking up the story and already writing it this far, it's great and I really love it!

UPDATE ASAP PLS

UPDATE PLZ ! Awesome so far :)

This is awesome! MAKE THE DARKNESS YOUR BITCH HAHA. Well done.

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WRITE DANG YOU!

I noticed in the first paragraph that you wrote 'hieroglyphics' instead of hieroglyph. Here is the difference:

Hieroglyphic is a written lanuage of which there are several types, and hieroglyphs are the symbols used in the hieroglyphic writing.

Awe, poor Yugi.
Poor Atem too.

T.T Poor Yugi...I hope Atem see's through it that he lied! .

Awe i love it so far!