OMG that was thrilling

I'm sorry but even in SM version I hated that Bella expected the vampires and wolves to like each other just because she asked them to! In most of the stories I've read where Bella ends up with Jacob I find shes pretty selfish expecting Jacob to be happy that shes willingly hanging out with his mortal enemy!

Great story

if Victoria bit Bella she would have died... Venom is deadly to werewolves so why did she not die? they don't just heal instantly either

This has been such a great story! I loved that she phased because of the alpha imprint

You are expressing emotions in a very vivid way ,as only one who had felt these in her life ! Your writing although very good is a little lengthy ... Keep writin ,you have potential to become a published author !

I would love to be a wolf

Aww

Only 1 tiny problem bonfire is 1 word

I would be angry if jake smiled and winked at other girls

You really get the personalities of jake and bells and how they minds work your just as good as S.M I this
Continue your great writing

awesome story

Great story.

I liked it

are you going to make sequel to this book