| Reviews for Demon's Luck |
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ReiSaotome The Devourer chapter 1 . 7/13 wait there more lets goooooooooooooooooooo |
Ted Hsu chapter 6 . 6/20 This was a wonderful expansion of "The Night the House of Cards Was Built." It allowed for development and growth, even when others might have been puzzled about what to do. I could only imagine Orochimaru laughing himself silly about how the Demon Brat found the Trickster part of the Nine-Tailed Fox within him able to rain the pain on the Leaf Village with just ONE night of poker. The "two pairs of threes" (taken from the "one pair of ones and another pair of ones" from the Bugs Bunny cartoon "Barbary Coast Bunny") was priceless. That Anko underestimated how resourceful a motivated young Master could be was inventive. Especially since a six-year old with relative innocence wouldn't be where he could be caught by Anko. It also helped the Hokage realize a vital part of the Village needed better protection, so that was ONE small benefit. This was a wonderful piece of work. Thank you again for this. |
loretta537 chapter 1 . 5/30 I really miss this story and hope you can continue it one day. |
Clark the Lion 8181 chapter 6 . 5/2 can't wait for the next chapter. |
Anon chapter 2 . 2/27 I hope you realize that, in your first Author's note, you replaced"heroin" with "heroine", effectively stating that heroines are addictive. Hope you have a surplus of them in your place :P |
Ryu wolf chapter 6 . 2/18 Kitty is an interesting name for a ninkin made me laugh when I read that part. Nice job with this chapter by the way. |
Richard1081 chapter 6 . 9/9/2019 Are you ever going to update this |
Chessmasteroftheuniverse chapter 2 . 4/25/2019 I got an idea, little naruto centered for this and based on his thought processes and beginnings: anything they want, but it must be orange. Anyone who reads this, even the author, can add to this, but this is my suggestion to you. |
ericsofly2 chapter 6 . 4/4/2019 Update this please |
relyks1333 chapter 1 . 3/7/2019 This was really good, guy. Thanks for writing. |
Joe Fenton chapter 1 . 3/6/2019 Fugaku: I've got five aces! What have you got, sir? Naruto: I've got SIX aces, sir. Fugaku: Iffen I had four legs and went 'heehaw', what would I be? Naruto: Why, you'd be a jackass! I can see why some got confused over how Anko got them to a million - who says "five fifty thousand"? Some read that as 'fifty-five' instead of what you meant, five hundred fifty. A bit over the top, but still a nice read. :) |
SinfulPride chapter 1 . 12/10/2018 Humorous. It was even a great idea. The bets got a bit too outrageous though. Betting family members, livelihoods, or homes seems a bit too much to me. Though Anko getting ahead of herself and betting herself and Kurenai does seem within character. |
Unknown chapter 6 . 11/2/2018 I love this story, you did a great job and also, don’t forget to add the mind jutsu thing. I really hope that Naruto and Sasuke and neji become like brothers. |
reaperofages chapter 6 . 9/23/2018 i know it has been a while since updated but would be cool to see a new chapter of this fic as i find it really good and funny as |
Volbia chapter 2 . 7/23/2018 I know this hasn't been updated in years but I just have to say I'm laughing my ass off and can't get the smile off my face at how cute naruto is with his sisters. |