| Reviews for Coalesced Matter |
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ethereal girl chapter 7 . 11/18/2019 your Doku is the first I liked ans could understand, thanks for this insight into his character |
SnowflakesandMozart chapter 7 . 2/17/2019 I enjoyed this a lot. Thank you for writing it. |
Alexa Hiwatari chapter 7 . 3/9/2018 Oh this was wonderfull! I loved every inch and piece of it! |
owl chapter 7 . 1/15/2018 omg this is so good! dooku doesn’t get enough fics tbh |
AACM25 chapter 4 . 1/3/2018 I can't believe how embarrassingly long it took me to figure out that you where pulling names from the power rangers, I mean Tori should have been a dead giveaway. |
Anne7 chapter 7 . 12/21/2017 I enjoyed this a lot! I really loved the family feels between all of them, and you showed off all the aspects that make Dooku such a fascinating character to perfection. I'll enjoy imagining the brighter future that results from this universe! |
SharKohen chapter 7 . 9/1/2017 I liked this idea of Dooku. Oh dear. Perhaps if he were closer to Obiwan and Anakin, the Clone Wars may have never happened. Or maybe ... he might dragged the two boys down with him. The thing is - as great as Christopher Lee is - the ATOC Dooku didn't get to shine as much as he did in the CW series. I remembered thinking how graceful and poised he was in fighting in CW, which was so impressive. Thank you for exploring his pre-fall character. He's so much more pleasant like this. |
AnyMoreBrightIdeasGenius chapter 7 . 6/29/2017 I absolutely love this fic. |
TortoisetheStoryteller chapter 7 . 3/30/2017 I love this. You really do a fantastic job with characterizations and interpersonal relationships. |
iWishIwasInvisible chapter 7 . 3/18/2017 wow. you actually made me like Dooku. I wasn't really expecting that. Excellently written |
Saevon chapter 7 . 2/10/2017 This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time! Your insight on human nature, and personalities is very much in tune with what I experience in my life. A warning, I would try to avoid using italics to provide focus for a word. Italics is easy to miss, and in general written vs oral tradition should not need to rely on word styles to convey important information. Do avoid using word style to differentiate things like "speech"/"thought" etc, you used it a little in the Mace Windu scene, but there you still managed to clearly indicate who said what. So far it doesn't look like you've crossed that line, only using italics to strengthen the emotion/tone that already existed in the sentence, but beware. Your style has a heavy focus on characters, but still manages to tell a wonderful story around them. I would love to read an actual book written by you, and if you end up publishing I wholeheartedly would grab a copy. |
Awesome chapter 1 . 1/30/2017 Man. I can't get enough of this story. This is simply the best one I have read dealing with Dooku and a good portrayal of his character. I thank you for creating such a great fanfiction. Have a nice day or night. |
littlemsstrawberry chapter 7 . 8/21/2016 Love it! I can't believe I spent the whole of yesterday and today reading your stories! Love how you wrote the familial relationships with dooku, quigon, obi and anakin. Thanks for sharing |
TheEdifier chapter 7 . 7/25/2016 I sense that I'm going to be binge-reading all your Star Wars fics and I'm so pumped. Thanks so much for all the hard work and thought you both put into this, it shows and was a captivating read! I enjoyed the characterization, especially of Dooku. I've previously been negative towards him, but your fics have been turning me around on that. Thanks again! |
Guest chapter 7 . 3/22/2016 Great story and great homenage to Power Rangers Dino Thunder Goldar |