Cool story bro. I'm just gonna pretend this has a happy ending. Wish there was more, but what can you do...

Ay, this story is really interesting and mysterious . you prolly are done with fan fiction as this is years old and might not see this, but man what a cool story. Brutal though. I Fucking pray you ain't boutta kill off more people. Please don't have killed off Honda, man.

I am so happy you resumed this story! It broke my heart that you were going to kill off mokie and jou. I am so looking forward to hearing how kaiba brought mokuba back from the dead. Go ahead...write on. I have questions.

YAY! You didn't kill them after all! I'm so happy!

I know this story is three years old but I just can't stop rereading it, it's just so damn good, from the tension to villain to the characterizations, it's all gold. If I ever compiled a top ten of my fav fanfiction of all time this would definitely be a strong contender it's just so good, I don't even like joukai that much but this fic is so good, so so good.

I just died... good story but I died.

If I decided to write more in my other review, I'd have to agree 100% with. SilentSnowLeopardNinja. The story doesn't make a lot of sense.

Skimmed through most of it. Most characters were out of character, so I could not emotionally care for them as much. A tragic story with a sad ending that had a lot of grammatical errors. Sorry, for my negative review but practice makes perfect, so if writing is what you enjoy, keep at it. I wish I had more to say but I rather end my review here.

:3

Oh my god. You did it. You killed off Mokuba. Wao. And then Katsuya. What, did you want Seto to suffer forever? Both people he cared about gone at the same time. Geez, this story was depraved. Depraved, but good. Very good story.

The story was pure torture you should at least put a happy ending after all the SHIT each went through ESPECIALLY jounouchi man you are too cruel :( I guess you fail as a human being :, (

Wow. What a story. I absolutely loved it. I was enthralled from the very start. The middle did raise a lot of questions for me and while the ambiguous ending was a bit of an ankle twister I will say I liked it from start to finish. I almost want to believe Katsuya is dead just because it would make perfect sense to it's dark genre- the same way leaving us to question how they were able to find Katsuya at all and what will happen to Seto now that he's lost both his brother and his beloved. I really did like the villain. He was twisted, sick but cunning. Classic kind of villain in my humble opinion. Great job. Will definitely read again.

was he saved?

MY FUCKING GOD WHY
MY HEART HURTS
IT BURNS
MY POOR KATSU-KUN
MY POOR SETO-KUN
OH MY PRECIOUS MOKU-CHAN
FUCK.
WHAT IS LIFE ANYMORE?!

Really good