This was sexy and hilarious. I completely loved it.

Such a fantastic representation of the love between these two characters. I am coming to the conclusion of my 3rd full ME play through with renegade Femshep/Liara and this was a great addition to the memories that I have made throughout the trilogy. You are definitely a very talented writer and your take on these two during this first romance with them was spot on, especially for my renegade. :) She most certainly would have been this aggressive in her speech with Liara because she had been waiting so long to express her feelings physically with her. Thank you again for sharing this beautiful story with those of us that have fallen in love with the ME family.

Thank the Goddess you did not delete this, not before I got a chance to go all hot and bothered with it anyway.

First of all, the chuckles I got out of this story caught me off guard and that is brilliant, your take on their first time was sweet, funny, sexy and very in character. Except, it pains me to say this, the 'fucks'. Might be I was too paragon, but I never heard Shepard say anything stronger than 'Damn'. You could say, "yeah but she was never doing things to Liara and vice versa". And it'd be fair. That's the only thing about your story that jarred me a bit.

Your writing is excellent. Your pacing is great (here both referring to writing and ahem, other sorts of pace). Your characterizations so adorable that had me giggling all the way. Also, damn, steamy sex. Hot. Damn. Excellent too, that. I'm losing my words now thinking back about certain scenes.

I don't know why you didn't post more of your work, though. Too sad, you're unbalancing the force of crappy writing-to excellent writing, ya know? ;)

Sorry if this is a lame review, I've been a long time away from fanfiction (another account, different fandom) and I forgot how I reviewed before.

Oh and I might PM you for more stories as soon as I finish reviewing the ones I already read from other authors.

The "Hiiii, Liaaaraa" was pure gold, great job, mate.

wow. What a wonderful and sexy introduction to mass effect. i loved it.

I swear the "Hiiii Liaaarra" Shit made me laugh so hard.

Good story. Thanks for sharing this with us !

absolutely fabulous...I'm in a puddle :O I hope you'll be writing more!

I really don't have words adequate to describe how wonderful this story is. It is an amazing piece of fic in large part because it is so *effortlessly* sexy and sweet and funny - which is the hallmark of exceptional writing and actually requires an enormous amount of effort from the writer.

I'm a sucker for a good "first time" story, and this is one of the best I've ever read. The nervous anticipation, the hesitant (and not-so-hesitant) exploration, the thrill of discovery - you hit every note perfectly. It's just marvelous. And hot like fire :-) Your characterizations, your dialogue, your descriptions - everything is just spot on.

Thanks so much for sharing this, and I hope you'll share more of your work with us in the future.

OUTSTANDING!

This is some of the best smut that I have ever read.

Oh wow. This was good... Excellent writing style. I always love reading works that exhibit such fine control over the English language. There's always something to learn in the writing.

Okay, now it's time for me to review here.

This was simply fantastic. I loved the humorous moments, and loved Liara's shyness even more.

You are a fantastic writer.

Honestly, I am sad this is over. I hope you plan to write more soon, because talent like yours should definitely be used.

Again, very good job. :)

I followed the link in salser's profile over to here based on her recommendation, and your work in the collaboration in Forever as One. this story is every bit as good as was promised. it's fun, funny, sexy, and so amazingly vivid and stimulating. *embarrassed smile* and it captures the best parts of a sweet, romantic relationship. makes me want even more to call my old girlfriend! *grinning* and this is definitely worth being late to work to read, which I am.

plus it really seems in keeping with Liara's character and it's so amazingly well-written. this is definitely an instant favorite. and if and when I get around to writing anything sensual for Liara in my work, I will definitely keep this in mind as a frame of reference. and of course, this is going to my favorites list! I will definitely check out more of your work whenever I can!

Fraking awesome.

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And OH EM GEE I know your other works on kinkmeme, you're one of my favorite authors. How, for the love of Hera and Zeus, did I miss this fic? This is why I sometimes hate Kmeme! .

Have to be honest, it's so much easier to read fics here than kmeme because it confuses me sometimes. But I have a love - hate with Kmeme, it has some fraking awesome writers there. Can't lie.