| Reviews for Stay With Me |
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Mystical-Elf-Of-Sorrow chapter 4 . 9/27/2014 Intreguing |
FullMetalBlunt chapter 4 . 7/19/2013 Very nice I like the dynamic of this, keep up the great work. |
SoulMore chapter 4 . 5/24/2013 FAN! |
KieraPSI chapter 4 . 1/3/2013 Well, it would be a good build...but after 6 months without an update, I'm sure we're all concerned something happened to you. |
Kristine chapter 4 . 11/4/2012 HEY I STILL HAVEN'T GIVE UP ON THIS FIC. IT'S FREAKING GOOD SO KEEEEEP GOIIIIIING please |
goki chapter 4 . 7/23/2012 it's part 4 and i'm starting to wonder what the summary has to do with this story. loki's enemies are nowhere to be found or even mentioned, tony is neither kind nor generous when it comes down to it, and i really don't see how ignoring, humiliating, and poking with no real aim or compassion could be construed as "pampering and kind words". and even if we ignore all of tony's casual abuse and lack of sympathy the only thing loki's been taken aback so far is how much a bully tony is and how he enjoys having loki jump through hoops for room and board. tl;dr i just read this fic and this is crazy, but it lied to me about what it was going to be like completely, so change the summary, maybe? (or write a fic in which loki does have enemies after him, he does need to put in effort to survive their wrath as well as being banished to earth, meets generousity and kindness in one or more people even if not in tony in particular, and maybe someone actually asks him his side of things and offers some kindness, if not actual understanding, in return, which all has loki taken aback by the lack of cruelty and abuse he encounters and maybe finds some happiness in that fic, if you wrote it.) (or both. both is good.) |
AshStilinski24 chapter 4 . 7/18/2012 that was me that did the medicated review, I'm still trying to wake up and I thought I was logged in :) sorry :) |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/18/2012 the build is awesome, sorry that I haven't reviewed sooner, been medicated |
wiggalator chapter 4 . 7/18/2012 This is great, can't wait for the next update :) |
Kristine chapter 4 . 7/17/2012 DUUUUUUUDE this is some good shit! I love how you write both characters, I can hear their voices perfectly! Especially Tony's nicknames for Loki. Bambi hahahaha, I love it. Also love the increasing drama, hope it gets even more intense. ;D You have to keep writing, I have to know what happens! |
UntoldStories97 chapter 4 . 7/17/2012 Yes! This story makes me want to puke rainbows and cry butterflies! I love it! Keep going, UD soon! |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/16/2012 I just want to hug Loki. :( Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens - hopefully Loki kicking Tony's ass? Update soon! |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/16/2012 The build is the best. Too many writers skip straight to the payoff ;) |
anastacianott chapter 4 . 7/16/2012 Can't wait for more! |
cara-tanaka chapter 4 . 7/16/2012 Can't wait for more |