This one definitely hits me somewhere
I just don’t know where specifically lol

But i gotta say i love this a whole lot, the characterisation is spot on !

These interactions between Natsu and Lisanna are super duper precious 3

This was anew view, there a different appeal that you don't see in much fanfiction these days. I notice a lot of stories written in the early 2000's have a smarter, marture look to them. A lot of Fanfictions in the recent days seem to have gone down hill, into a puddle of cliche madness and terrible character developments.
Though this one, that it's too old, reminded me of the older ones, and there is something nice in that. Thank you for writing and uploading this.

Mira is older than Elfman

i absolutely cannot believe the nerve of the first three reviewers. just—just pretend they don't exist, 'kay?

this — this, was just marvellous. from one of the reviewers, i understand that you aren't a nali shipper? well, congratulations. i actually thought you supported nali. for a nalu shipper (i'm assuming you ship nalu? correct me if i'm wrong, please.), you write awesomely for a pairing you don't support. unless you multi-ship natsu, of course ;)

this was stunning. great job! :D

I've never seen NaLi but I still love Lisanna and I love this. ?
I can't stand how so much of the fandom disregards her. :/

Really nice writing, especially the ending. :P

its good

CUTEEEEEE, CUTEEEEEEE THAT.
I love Nali and almost no things of his in Spanish, I discovered this and came immediately issues here.
I really liked :) even with the insinuation NaLu from jealousy *aw, love it so much*
Greetings.

Okay, hold up, hold up!

Gaaaah! I mean, I'm not a fan or either Lisanna or Natsu (actually, I'm kind of annoyed that Mashima decided to bring Lisanna back and then promptly forget to develop her character further, what a waste), BUT. I've always preferred LisannaxNatsu over LucyxNatsu (because I'm partial to LucyxGray, not that that has any chance of happening, but whatever).

And by gods, this is beautiful. I don't know what prompted me to read this when I don't really read FT fiction that much (maybe the summary?), but I'm glad I did. Your description of Lisanna's feelings (even Natsu's) is very believable, and gee, I only wish we could see something like this happen in the manga (fat chance of that happening as well).

Overall, good job, I love it, and thank you.

uper cute X3

It's so cute and sweet story i hope you can make more Nali fanfic :)

This is so cute and sweet

Hey good job on this! It was cute and I liked how you portrayed Natsu as a tender person when it comes to intimate moments like this (as he definitely would be). They are not out of character too, something which I find many authors writing them out to be when it comes to FairyTail. So once again great job! (:

Wasn't expecting you to do a NaLi story but it was still cute and sweet! You did a great job of showing Lisanna's return from her point of view! This is coming from a non-NaLi shipper: Great job on the story!

Eyo FIRE here. Again.

"A small pang of jealousy taps her chest, but she wills it away until it melts to the pit of her stomach and dissolves. She is strong, and she had expected change. There was nothing to be jealous of." - Very nice description. TBH, it's kind of a relief from all the JEALOUSRAGE!Lucy I keep seeing in the fandom T_T.

It ends well. It ends very well, short and sweet. It has a sort of warm, calm feeling to it. :D

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-Fire

Such a super cute story!