yay, update soon

Great Story! Love this pairing. Hope you update soon!

I really like your story so far. You're really in character- I can hear the conversations in my head. But you could expand a little on scenes, like add more thoughts and actions since your pretty dialogue heavy. Anyways, keep on the great story.

IshiNemu is my favorite pairing and that's kind of what brought me here. '

I can't wait to see where this story is going to go. I also like how your trying to write a new pairing, even if it's not your favorite.

It is a good start. I am looking forward to read more. :)