I really like what you did with Mao in this story. He is usually dealt with quickly or becomes quite the annoyance, but few stories actually keep him around and close for a longer time. Man, every word off his mouth rubs me the wrong way, but I can't help but like him in spite of that.

Hey just want to let you know that I think the story plot is laid out very well and I like how the story is weaved differently from the canon without resorting to "artificially-engineered" fixes that makes the story too good to be true. It seems you have a dozen of other stories in your pipeline, but I really hope you will find the passion and time to come back to this one.

Is this story abandoned? :(

Really nice story, I really like the butterflies from the new (or faster) decisions of Lelouch, especially the disadvantageous ones (like Orange having more doubts than canon) since it's boring when everything is easily fixed.

Also, I'm really enthusiast for what comes next, I can't prevent myself from imagining the debates aboard the submarine to decide what to do without Zero. Because let's face it, the only strategist with a sliver of a chance against Schneizel is Cornelia, and there's just about no-one except maybe Kallen who would even entertain the idea of following her orders in battle. Add that C.C. will basically be forced to talk about the Geass is they want to hope to rescue him, with all the trust problems that would ensue, and I can see blood spilling. Or Kallen stepping up to take command and have everyone play nice(-ish), all Knight of Honor-like (that quote from Guildford when he was advising Euphy on who to choose as a Knight seemed really on-point).

I also have this weird idea of all the commanders trying to decide whether to throw the Brits in a cell as a precaution, Nunally coming to ask where her brother is and thus the others, being not morons guessing that Zero is a Brit. Because, what better moment for the Black Knights to learn this little tidbit? I know, my brain works weirdly.

Anyway, I do really like this story, and I can't wait to read the... /sees the updated date/ Ah. Damned. Why is it every time I see a good, completed fic, it turns out the sequel is abandoned at the best moment? Oh well, I see you're still writing on the site for other fandoms even though you stopped Code Geass a few years ago, so who knows, maybe you'll get new inspiration? Anyway, it was really a good read, so thanks for sharing it.

Goten

Truly the commanders curse. Right now Lelouch's friends are blaming him because they are weak cowards. When they were losing, they blamed Britannia. But once they got a taste of victory, they wanted more. Nothing has changed, they just expect more from Lelouch, and are whining like children when they dont get it because the world doesnt give a fuck what you want.

Kallen never cared about His methods until her mother was a victim, and yet she never told him her mother was there. He cant make plans without information. But of course, its easier to just blame Lelouch. Because unlike Zero, and Britannia, Lelouch has a face, someone she can yell at.

... This. Was. AWESOME.
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I know this story is probably dead by now, but it really was an amazing ride. Loved it.

Please come back... (Cries a river)

Please finished this... I'm still waiting for this story

An intense battle. Euphie's been arrested, two Knights of the Round have been captured, and Kallen's getting suspicious. You really know how to keep your readers on the edge of their seats, and I LOVE that!

The second part begins with Luciano Bradley. Can anyone say "bloodbath?"

Either way, I look forward to what happens next.

This is a great fic and I've really enjoyed reading it! I'd love to read the rest of it if you ever feel like continuing!

This story is so good... but i just noticed it hasn't been updated in 4 years... this makes me sad. Maybe a miracle will happen, but i guess it's unlikely, so i just have to say that this is so far one of the best Code Geass fanfics i've read.

Have Suzaku and Kallen become thhe same person?

I expect a continuation by the time Lelouche of the Ressurection comes out.

This fic is really entertaining in its own right but your choices of picking out Categories are out of place for the occasion. At the very least (if you not writing this story anymore) correct the Categories to match your overall style for your story. The adventure aspect implies that your characters are 'going around the world in 80 days' but they seem to be stuck in the same country not exactly going other places. As for the Romance, I can understand if you're not good at it, however, your fic never seems to be designed as a Romance story ether and that's pretty misleading.

I think your story is really good however as an Adventure/Romance it is not one of them. If anything it leans towards the Friendship/Humor Catagory which is your story's biggest strength (and whats drawling large crowds of doves) then any other on this site I have seen in a while. So if you are still recovering from writer's block I think you need to change the Categories to help identify/streamline your story better.